Say Cheese
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1038 days ago
Submitted on:
Jul 24 '09
Comments:
145 comments
Average score:
3.17 from 792 votes
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Santo76 on Jul 24 '09 Ha! that was a loooong way from your other sub...
I´m glad you reworked it... it's a bright concept and wood chairs. |
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alexmdc on Jul 24 '09 haha very very cool!
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jamesf on Jul 24 '09 nice
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Great to see it up!
So many things I like about it, but most of all that somehow the mouse in the foreground is clearly the scheming mastermind. |
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i agree with bygrinstow. i wouldn't want to work for that guy.
great posture on that one. well done! |
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quister on Jul 24 '09 Very cool idea, great dramatic lighting and shadows, love the placement and composition! Awesome illo! $5
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Ivantobealone on Jul 24 '09 Wow This is very good!!
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Resistance on Jul 24 '09 awesome!!
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Resistance on Jul 24 '09 5$
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Jebs on Jul 24 '09 oh, i missed this critique? possible? anyway, good work Brightwood! i am not sure of the placement of the moon at the center, but that's a detail.
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Haha! Yes!
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if this prints, im buying it :D
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yeee!
Great idea, delicius moon, I want a part too, he he he :) |
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Brightwood on Jul 24 '09
I hope you didn't vote me down from the placement of the moon. It's like a bad translation from Japanese, or something. I also like how the moon is one of those flat, round cheeses (wheel?) instead of a globe.... |
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So good. Congrats Laura on a quite brillant sub.
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Yay the power of critiquing in action - an incredible journey!
This turned out amazing BW! 5$ |
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Jebs on Jul 24 '09 @brightwood: i gave you a 4 ;)
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nice work! :) good luck!
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Love it!
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hmmmm comment fail...Love it Laura, worth all the hard work!
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great second carry-on idea tee. I love it! $5
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hahaha, great idea, good draw :)
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nice job, cute idea!
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Haha, good to see it up fo' scoring. 4
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agrimony on Jul 25 '09 hahah great rework!!
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Pakpandir on Jul 25 '09 cool stuff! I like the silhouttes! They make it great
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nice really nice idea!
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Chris Rowson on Jul 25 '09 Awesome lighting on this piece Laura. It's good to see this one finally reach the scoring pages, fantastic work keep 'em coming!!
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HAHA.sg on Jul 25 '09 Haha! That's really cute, awesome colours as well(:,
great job(:,4 from me(:, |
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HorsefaceDee on Jul 25 '09 nice work!
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Great job done 5$
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FRICKINAWESOME on Jul 26 '09 hahaha, you still included the window seat on there, hehehe. Thanks for focusing on what i alsways thought was the strongest part of this idea, namely the mice reaching towards the cheesy moon! Great stuff here in your wonderfully detailed style, great highlights!
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Great idea and great execution. 5:)
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Funny
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Nice!! :D
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Awesome shirt!
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great work once again 5 from me!
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Yes! Nice one.
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Resistance on Jul 27 '09 this is great!!!
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fatheed on Jul 27 '09 Great stuff! Would also make a great kids tee
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evan3 on Jul 27 '09 brightwood
loving the stlye and mice def $5! |
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Wonderful! I really love this!
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5$ awesome.
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this is fantastic.
5$ |
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Cheese!
5! |
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Really nice idea! u got my vote!
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ha!
love this! 5$ |
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Incredibly wonderfully awesome! $5 $5 $5
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Yay, it's finally up! Good luck! 5
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Gorgeous! I wish I had seen the evolution in critique.
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Unfortunately I haven't figured out halftones in flash. Will have to look up.
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This is great! I don't know anyone who wouldn't like this.
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Would buy this for sure. $5!
Very fuN! Check Mine out: http://www.threadless.com/submission/222440/Architectural_Treasure |
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SOVAY!
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haha. great design evolution. awesome result. will print!
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BRILLIANT! $5
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daam cool! love the taught
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the boy fitz hammond on Jul 28 '09 Oh yesss!!
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i think it's really nice!
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mark722 on Jul 28 '09 Very cool!
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ihihi
I already have scored your design :D however nice work! thanks for advice! ;) |
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ni.m. on Jul 28 '09 love the shadows of the chair on the blue and the placement. nice illo
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cute idea and well done. good luck
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Really great! :) Those clever mice.
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Like the tower of Babel!
I especially love the texture on the moon/cheese. 5 from me :D |
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This is a really nice and cute design! Great job! Good luck! =)
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I like it. My only minor suggestions are to rework the grass. The stroke on the grass doesn't quite fit with the rest of your illustration. Also, I'd suggest moving the mouse in the foreground closer to the stack of chairs. possibly flip him so he's looking at the chairs from the other direction to lead the eye through the comp.
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AWESOME job with this one! Print! 5$!
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i love this idea its very fun and playful and looks great on shirt!
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nom nom nom
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cute idea !
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nicely done. i like it. : )
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bennyd302 on Jul 28 '09 great work!
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Jemae on Jul 28 '09 very nice! must five! :))
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I also like how that one mouse does not seem to be doing his job very well of minding the dangerously unstable stack of chairs...
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rip you up? okkkkkkk...my 3 year old son draws better than this!
... ...actually I don't have a son, and I actually really like how you've brought such a detailed story to life with relative simplicity. I don't often give 5's and I almost never give a $, but this hits it. Great work. |
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I would call this both beautiful and cheeky, I love a picture that tells a story and this tells a great one, voted 5, and a high five to you!
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glad to see it up, great idea, cool kids tee
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Resistance on Jul 29 '09 so great!!!
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kids tee! oh dear. does that mean I can't wear it? :p
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Love the design, especially the compisition. It's a breathe of fresh air to see an offset vertical design instead of a straight on, middle of the shirt picture.
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heheh just imagining me trying to pull on a kids' sized tee "but I really like it!"
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This is GREAT brightwood, love your work! $4 and i'd buy it!
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nice chunck, fun concept
5ver plz comment on mine: http://www.threadless.com/critique/48828/colourful_bliss thank you |
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wow you have a lot of people commenting on this - it is really good I love the visual concept, the surreality of it and the characterisation of the mice.
Well done |
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Brilliant design!
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Cheesy goodness!
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AJajaJAaJAaj CHEEEESE
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I LOVE IT ITS AWESOME
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Really cute idea!
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wow this is simply awesome!! everything seems to just "work" :D
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by the way thanks for the comments if you have time check out my changes thanks again
http://www.threadless.com/critique/49618/Cool_Cat |
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I am loving the cartoony art style of that cheese moon!!!
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love it! creative! way to go!
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Thank you for the comments! And I've already scored this shirt, but I'll definitely comment now :) I love the idea for it!
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I was out of town for five days and busy the days before and after, so I'm glad I caught this before it finished scoring. The number of comments is so encouraging. I really enjoyed the evolution of this design. Great job!!
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cute idea, would make a great kids tee.
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ahaha! i love this! it's a very clever idea. Nice work!
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CazKing on Jul 29 '09 great! This is really cool!
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very nice.
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i like it... very nice.
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nice nice, i like it!
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Chengui on Jul 30 '09 Absolutely awesome, but I'm not digging how the mice are done - especially the cheese one.
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evan3 on Jul 30 '09 brightwood!
insane amount of comments! i am hoping for a high score! |
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I KNEW IT!!!!!! great work
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Yeaaa on Jul 30 '09 Great idea! i like how it looks on the tee :)
Good luck! |
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quister on Jul 30 '09 Lots of great comments, so PRINT!!! this gem so I can wear it around!
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I like how the top mouse is so excited that it looks like he could drop the cheese.
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i like the idea and the design. it reminds me of a nursery rhyme.
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perfect! 5$
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dig it. you should go into illustration.
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cool!
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hey this is a winner 5$
also thanks for your very constructive critique of my work. appreciate the time you took and your great ideas! Ax |
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TangYauHoong on Jul 31 '09 Sweet!
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I really like how you've come to this excellent piece. I've seen the whole proces and it's def come out really good.
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This is super clever good job!! NIce and funny
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love the work you have put into this design! good luck! :)
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KDLIG on Jul 31 '09 this is a sure Print!!!
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Nice!
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rodrigobhz on Jul 31 '09 KDLIG on Jul 31 '09
this is a sure Print!!! First of many! Good luck! |
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I WANT THIS!!!
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Clever. Nice work.
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cool beans
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coooooooool
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kidloko on Jul 31 '09 Easy $5!
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Ivantobealone on Jul 31 '09 Congrats!!!!! sweet score!!!!!!!
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evan3 on Jul 31 '09 holy crap
brightwood amazing score!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Nice score!!
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jodabaum on Jul 31 '09 great score!
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good score!
think you deserve wayyyyyy more though lol |
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Congrats on the great score!! :D
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Honestly, I felt this had to be at least a 3, but I didn't say so, because I didn't want to jinx it!
Congrats, Laura! |
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Also, I love the stars.
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evan3 on Jul 31 '09 this is a def print brightwood
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EricaTheRed on Jul 31 '09 great score, congrats!!!
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Congrats on the kick ass score, you lovely lady you.
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WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Awesome score; can't wait to get one!!!
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congrats honey!!!!!! Great score!!!!!
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rodrigobhz on Jul 31 '09 Great score! Congrats!
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WOW bw congrats!!!! well done!
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Santo76 on Jul 31 '09 what an awesome score! congrats Laura!!!
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Congrats on the score!! I'm glad you didn't give up on this design. :)
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good job, brightwood! great score!
hey, would you mind to help me decide which colors to use on this? thanx! Reading Lolita in Tehran |
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FRICKINAWESOME on Aug 02 '09 AMAZING SCORE WOAH-MAN! PRINT PRINT PRINTIE TIME!
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congrats! great score! :)
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Chris Rowson on Aug 03 '09 Awesome score!!! PRINT!!!
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badbasilisk on Aug 10 '09 really sweet score - congrats ;-)
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Jebs on Aug 10 '09 JUST WOW!!!!!! what a score :)
congrats, finally, you managed to get a deserved score, now, fingers crossed for your first print ;) |
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GREAT SCORE, I missed this one, PRINT!
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Brightwood, thats a boss score and well deserved
if you get a chance, let me know what you think of my final design ! http://www.threadless.com/submission/225078/Spaghetti_vs_Meatballs/ |
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agrimony on Aug 14 '09 i just realised u already got your first slogan print! congrats on that, now lets make this your 2nd! =D
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great job, gurl!
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2 days later
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I want this to print so much, it's definitely a shirt I'd wear! Well done on the score.
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2 days later
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Came back to look...to answer your blog question. Will leave an answer in the blog. Still love this. Hope it prints for you...and me. I'd love to wear it.
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well i think it's awesome for one... good luck!
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kako64 on Sep 02 '09 Great score & design ! Congrats !
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great work
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6 days later
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hey, it could still happen. aren't there stories of designs going for a year before they got printed? I bet sometimes they want to 'schedule' some designs for certains times of year or to not clash with other things that are getting printed.
This is good. It should be printed. |
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Love this, Maybe they'll still print it.
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mtths on Nov 08 '09 awesome score!
great work :-) |
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YaaH on Jan 27 '10 nice idea. I like it ;D
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13 days later
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Oh man that's awesome. Looks like I missed scoring, but that would have been a 5. Maybe 5$, I'm a bit broke/cheap atm.
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