In Umbrella We Trust (peace of mind)
About the design
on July 20, 2009
The sense of absurd but symbolic protection this little gentleman has chosen, is methaphoric, so are the elements on the puppet strings, which are meant to fit the weather/ danger themes, and so is the whole design. You'll see for example the puppet strings controlling each others, coming from the upper clouds.
The earth, humanity (planet of hands) is now beginning to be colored, so, "protected" and "in peace" by the gentleman. I chose for the umbrella the peace colors flag, and it's also the rainbow colors of course.
It works on 7 colors, but i also made an alternative graphic version in 1 color.
Very important: THANKS a lot for all the ones who helped me, suggested, posted awesome comments on the critique section. And thanks to Manos for the flash template.
PS: (about copyrights, as the hands are inspired by the godfather's ones, it's clearly not an issue, as i redrew everything myself and mirrored it, so it's even the other hand).
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Jebs
The sense of absurd but symbolic protection this little gentleman has chosen, is methaphoric, so are the elements on the puppet strings, which are meant to fit the weather/ danger themes, and so is the whole design. You'll see for example the puppet strings controlling each others, coming from the upper clouds.
The earth, humanity (planet of hands) is now beginning to be colored, so, "protected" and "in peace" by the gentleman. I chose for the umbrella the peace colors flag, and it's also the rainbow colors of course.
It works on 7 colors, but i also made an alternative graphic version in 1 color.
Very important: THANKS a lot for all the ones who helped me, suggested, posted awesome comments on the critique section. And thanks to Manos for the flash template.
PS: (about copyrights, as the hands are inspired by the godfather's ones, it's clearly not an issue, as i redrew everything myself and mirrored it, so it's even the other hand).
csimpson8
Choice placement. I like.
Kim456
cute, nice placement
quister
Great concept, simple but totally eye-grabbing illo and the placement/composition on the tee is WOW! Awesome tee design, one color on orange ftw! $5
kidloko
Cooool!!
Heavenward Bound
love love love it, $5
RicoMambo
placement is so intelligent and nice idea
beautywithanedge
the blue design is good, however i don't like the placement on the shirt.
randyotter3000
great work jebs!
Ivantobealone
I've loved this since the critique, turned out great!
Jebs
wow! thanks a lot guys, i'm loving this moment, exciting! :)
Noretta
I love on blue jean with rainbow colours!
it's fantastic!
5$!!!
:D
renfrue
ORANGE for me plz!
Leroy_Hornblower
Nice work, Jebs.
jess4002
great! 5$
Francesa
It has to be the seven colored one on blue.
alexmdc
very cool!
roadkill3d
Nice layout on the shirt! Good job!
TheInfamousBaka
Very cute and I really love the placement! :)
MessedUpPerfection
The seven colored one!!! Definately..although the cloud on the shoulder looks a little wierd, maybe you should make it not solid- it kinda draws your attention away from the cool parts.
sustici
awesome placement
ben chen
nice!!!
cash_ivc
awesome!
in blue!
greenttentacle
super cute! love the coloured additions :)
charlieangel
cute!
FRICKINAWESOME
LOVE the placement and idea here, a total dynamic invention on your part man!
Robsoul
great stuff, love it
wazodo
very big idea, and good work too!!!
I think like "Messedupperfection", you should make the cloud not solid...
Tigerbill
It's good to see it up. Great design.
jamesf
lovely
LAKUNA
love the subtle shading of the top of the globe.
jrmasm
love it. blue please.
agrimony
great!
hernandez_cindy
that is a really good design!!
good job!!!
hernandez_cindy
omg its SO awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jebs
THANKS for the support, that's appreciated, a looot!
what can i say? well, i want even more comments because i just love it, and criticism is appreciated too, to improve again and again.
@messedupperfection and wazodo: thanks for your sincerity, however, i disagree, because i tried it without being solid, and it was not as good as it is right now ;)
Paintbymusic
awesome placement!
noodlezoop
very nice!
charlieangel
I like it!! :)
Aha.
glad to see this one finally submitted, I like it a lot! 5 !!
PauloAccioly.
perfect.
wwwakeupmaggie
nice design, i think i like the single color better than the multicolor actually. and great use of placement too.
Jebs
thanks again for your nice comments. I'm pretty happy to see that my placement is appreciated as i tried to make something different ;)
Chris Rowson
Good to see this finally up jebs! Great child-like but heart-felt feeling about this one, and it looks great on both the blue and orange!
$$$$$$$$$$$5$$$$$$$$$$$$
tymn
It's a nice illustration but I still say the hand is too similar to The Godfather title.
tnnguyen3
what a imaginative design.
azn123
like the third the best! 5
Ian_Pawelec
Very nice
bhoomika
Love it ! On the blue on the side placement. I would so buy this!! !
$5
lauramartinelli
I love it on the orange.
Can u help me?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/49410/Billy_Kwan
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