The Adventures of Mr. Bullet
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1080 days ago
Submitted on:
Jun 13 '09
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39 comments
Average score:
2.60 from 559 votes
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Resistance on Jun 13 '09 yay! its up! 5!!
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wotto on Jun 13 '09 This is very cool, not sure Threadless will go for it but still very cool
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nice
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ginetteginette on Jun 13 '09 is it supposed to be like comic panels? because the composition of them seems really bad, even for comics. there's a lot of weird spacing.
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I agree the spacing is a bit iffy, but the idea is great. I love the comic book effect on the last frame!
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evan3 on Jun 13 '09 WOOOW
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alexmdc on Jun 13 '09 cool
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agrimony on Jun 13 '09 zworp!! hahaha
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with fixed spacing, this would be so awesome!
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i've seen comics with this kind of spacing, and I believe the spacing is also part of the joke, but yes it does look a bit awkward
but still funny and would look great on the shirt with tiny improvements! 4! |
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rodrigobhz on Jun 13 '09 I think it's really funny and the comic book style is neat!
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I like the sound it makes "sworp"
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haha cool!
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lawrence loh on Jun 14 '09 something different! nice!
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staffell on Jun 14 '09 aww, i wish it had been an arrow :(
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C Kid on Jun 14 '09 Cool! I would wear it!
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RicoMambo on Jun 14 '09 another comic, I like it:)
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haha nice!
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Ivantobealone on Jun 14 '09 Great colors!!
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very cool
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This is great!
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NICEEE 5$
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hilarious
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mezo on Jun 15 '09 Really great idea, but I wish the comic style was more old school (think 1 color with hand drawn lines).
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Santo76 on Jun 15 '09 hahaha, fun stuff!
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Ha!
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TangYauHoong on Jun 16 '09 yeah cool!
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Eika.Dopludo on Jun 16 '09 i think it's unusual way of thinking...and
Ginette is right about composition,check out mine, please T-SHIRT Buddha |
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cool illustration. this is a great idea. i really like the title.
i don't like the boxy-ness of the whole image on the tee, would prefer it if the frames were mixed up a bit not forming a overall box. |
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FRICKINAWESOME on Jun 17 '09 I dunno, i really think the box design is part of the parody here, but maybe it could be re-designed in more of a glass breaking shape to the whole piece. The actual joke and idea behind this and slight tweaking of comic book ridiculousness is brilliant duder, hopefully this will be your third or 4th print!
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Laser Bread on Jun 18 '09 cool idea man!
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nathanwpyle at gmail.com on Jun 18 '09 Whoa, a Laser Bread comment!
Thanks, all! |
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i agree with dexter.. some tilt to the windows would be great... other than that, very nice design!
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Looks great on blue. :)
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i wasn't feelin so great but this design made me :) !
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Awesome job man!
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very nice... you put the comic style into top gear!
you deserve a print man. I also like your other work and notice you're good at the multi-drawing story thing. A thing someone said as he was making a critique on your T-Rex wasn't allways a killer comic design (liked that a lot too btw) was: everybody does the same. Maybe you could try making somekind of a reverse/backwards logic joke/story, or use a converging (as apposed to linear) development. As i wrote this i was thinking of two movies: Memento & Magnolia. Hard to put into a t shirt but would be nice. Keep up the good stuff! 5€! |
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About my design
Thanks to those who helped critique - especially Bygrinstow whose color suggestion really helped.
Thanks to Manos for the template and iRocko for the tee pics.
Tee could be dark grey or white too.
Thanks for voting!