This is a pretty good design, but I feel it has a couple issues.

The embellishment at the bottom is too small and I don't think it'll come across well in a final print. Also some of your lines are really faint and also wouldn't show up in the final product. Same goes for your text, sometimes it just dissappears. You really need to give those some width so they print.

The tank is cool, the butterflies are pretty cliche. The eye could be cool, but right now it just isn't working for me. It looks like it came from a seperate drawing and just doesn't fit the rest of the design.

I really like the use of black white and grey in this design though.

I am sorry about the artwork have some lose when i copy the artwork from Adobe Illustration to FLASH.

there's a decent balance overall in the composition, which i like. and you pull off the ornateness fairly well. take some of unled's reccomendations into consideration though.

The "b" is missing in "Unfogettable."

Lose the splatters/drips.

Make the tank and flower grey.

Everything else white.



Good work graphicairlines.

And lose the eye too.

so many unrelated elements, there's no direction to the design

i don't know why but i really like this....without the eye, but yea, you print-i wear :)

Your other stuff is better than this, man. The type setting is good, really like it combined with the filigree at the bottom. Upside-down flower is also good. Not sure about tanks though, especially in a non-comedy way. The eye seems unnecessary.



Your website is great.

i would only take away the grey symbol/text from below the bottom flower and get rid of the text, let the viewer take what they want away from viewing the graphic. apart from those two things, and obviously the loss of imagery from the transfer, its brilliant. i would also try somthign other than black for the tshirt... black is really sort of.. solid because its the darkest shade. i would prefer to wear a dark blue tshirt to a black one anyday.

I love this.