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is the girl naked or wearing a body suit? get rid of the text or try to integrate it more artfully into the illustration. you might want to think about beefing it up with more detail
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i wold really like this without the text--you should finish the drawing and put the girl in some high heels or somethin
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oh... i forgot to mention, I like the concept.
so THAT should be all i have to say..... and apparantly misspell too. |
Sorry, didn't get to detailed on the cards.