Perhaps the saddest story of all time: the rabbit and the moon. I'm trying to show him racing up toward his goal (although in the story, the moon is not a candy).
I would love this whole design if there was no big flying rabbit and it was just the other rabbit and the back line work... the candy is kind of weird... but I REALLY love the dead rabbit and the back line work.
Maybe still put the dead flying rabbit leaning in some space that isn't occupied by the lines? Change the moon from a candy to something else?
I disagree that the big rabbit should be outta there. I think it really makes the shirt and makes me wonder about the weird story going on for the departed little rabbit. It's intriguing and fun to look at the two distinct looks going on in it. Very cool! $5