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I like the concept as well, but somehow the composition is off. I don't like the outline or the size of the newspaper. It should look more collage-y. But I like the idea lots.
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Great idea, but I agree with the previous posters, something is off with the composition. Colors are nice too.
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newspaper is a bit too big on the tee.
critique section will help. you can always resubmit the idea with critique help added in :) |
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haha! great idea! please vote for mine as well: i heart copenhagen
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