afr presents SHOP. Hope y'all like it...

out of all your stuff, this is my least favourite. i dont even know wats going on in it. but your stuff still kanes everyone else aroudn here

I feel this is heads above your other stuff. It's borderline abstract / representational and is really well thought out.
my only complaint is the box around it is pretty boring, try playing with the shape some more to make it feel like more part of the image. The lighter colors look better without it.
All your tagging makes this seem too much like a company shirt though, which looses points in my book.
I think a different placement might help this too.

Logos all over the place = bad.

khaki makes my mouth water

i like the graphic a lot but the colors need to be less contrasted

>>>Logos all over the place = bad.

I completely disagree. But I fell in love with Nathan Rd in HongKong at 16 so I'm a bit biased. That's what this piece is about really. Nathan Rd congestion projected 500 years into the future. It was originally going to be a cover pages for my website (still might use it) hence all the AFR logos, its an AFR shop downloading from a future parallel reality.

Nice explanation, but still....
Good work, however.