i know. el crappe.

really nice. though the dots running from the face to the bottom of the shirt's out of place.

me like.

agree: better not have the dot line thing - nice though

really. i feel it keeps the parallel proportions

SnailRiot, What do you mean by parallel proportions?

There seems to be competing focal points, with directional lines going to both the hearts and the eye. But the hearts seem to be stronger of the two because of their white color.



I like this design but it seems like you should push the Robot aspect a little more. That face looks too human to be easily recognized as a robot, but that seems to be what you're alluding to. The lash / tear seems a little strange.

The hearts say to me that In the robot evolution, perhaps they can feel or love now (now being the future that this T-shirt comes from). I like the idea, but don't really like the hearts much. And they appear to be the only elements in your design with white

I think you could push the circuitboard lines a little more as well. You have some different line thicknesses but I think you could make it more obvious.

Oh and great colors.

Sorry I typed so much.

oh i hear you! i am with you all the way. the design actually spawned from the hearts. i couldnt bare to get rid of them. the face looked a bit more robotic yes, but i wasnt sure if people would understand the extra lines...you know what i mean.



i was hoping for a more circuitboard effect but i didnt want to over do it. i didnt want too be over conceptual with this either, so i didnt want to push the visual elements too much. i wanted it to still have some air of err...i dont know the word. 'randomness' i guess. however as the designer and you the potential 'client', ill re-work it. cool.

THANKS GUYS! bbs...

i really like this. i would just lose the vertical dots that trail down and make the face more robotic like everyone else said

okay so once its done i just resubmit the image under the same filename...do they that i am re-submitting then? im taking into consideration everything! its coming soon.

the hearts seem really out of place



nice though

really nice, great job. i'd buy this *5*

johnny 5 is alive.

let's dance to sinatra champ!

I agree on trying to make the face a little more synthetic... Maybe some seams along the side of the face, following the contour of the eye and cheek, you know what I mean? I really like it though.

i really love it. It's framed very nicely.

OHHH GUYS!

I RE-WORKED THE SHIRT!

I just re-submitted it. when i get the go-ahead ill post the new designs url...keep posting/scoring here though

please....of course. thanks by the way guys. for the scores and the comments. really appreciate ALL the feedback. thanks to you guys the design looks much better and works together alot more. so cool!

i really like this design. if you took out the hearts, and shortened the trail of lines a bit, kept the lines by the heart i would def wear it. if you want to keep the heart though (on her face) keep one of them but i dont think all four are necessary. just my .02

i realy like it

i dont know about the brown shirt thow

but the design and the other rs are grate

I really like this!!!!!good job!

i have never seen anything like this at all. ever.

uh-ohh i dont know if thats a good thing...heh.

GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!! I HAVE RE-WORKED THE IMAGE AND ITS BEEN POSTED AGAIN. go here:



http://www.threadless.com/submission/21406.html