Looks like the shutters got him. Nice illustration none the less.

interesting illustration. I'd buy, maybe a different color shirt.

yeah i agree with the shirt color comment. maybe a heather grey, or even black. care to elaborate on what's going on here though? as far as theme is concerned i mean.

Looks like my neighbor... Don't get me wrong, I like the rendering, but I think he'd be freaked out if he saw me with this on.

Yes: theme, message, anything because this is a snooze.

i'd buy it if it were'nt on yellow.

I'd definitely buy this. Maybe put it on black though.

I'm open to suggestions on colour because i'm startin to agree about the yellow don't know if black may be a bit heavy though?
As to the theme its loosely based on a friend of mine, i've depicted him looking out to the future from his present confines in the "box" that holds him. Thats the simplified and short version anyway......Thanks for commmets much appreciated good and bad.

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nice illustration, maybe just use the guy though, no boxing him in

i think the character looks arrogant and the box that contains him seems to contradict his personality, i like its ironic ness

change the shirt color!