Yummy!

by lawrence loh

The stats: Scoring finished: 1456 days ago; Submitted on: May 16, 2009; Comments: 33; Average score: 2.22 from 543 votes
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Submitted by lawrence loh on May 16, 2009

i have rework on this design since my previous submission still got room to improved it. therefore i have come out this new design, hope you all like it.

lawrence loh

on May 16, 2009 at 01:48:32

Artist

i have rework on this design since my previous submission still got room to improved it. therefore i have come out this new design, hope you all like it.

thestray

on May 21, 2009 at 22:16:00

I wish the guy looked as good as the shark.

GreenRabbit

on May 21, 2009 at 22:19:51

Yeah, the way you drew the guy ruins this a little.

brentendo

on May 21, 2009 at 23:23:39

remove the guy, just have the shark. I reckon it looks good enough to just have on its own

Marco Enrico

on May 22, 2009 at 07:05:24

i think its funny...4

Life is short

I agree with TheStray about the guy.

Huge improvement over your first version. The shark and water are awesome. There's something about the close crop of the shark that really appeals to me - that (without the guy) really large on the shirt could be interesting.

lawrence loh

on May 22, 2009 at 08:38:01

Artist

haha...i guess putting the little fat guy in it would add little funny scene, guess i was wrong. maybe should resubmit it again without the poor fat guy.

radreb

on May 22, 2009 at 13:29:36

shark is awesome.

theevidenceisme

on May 22, 2009 at 14:54:36

i like the little fat guy

Heavenward Bound

on May 22, 2009 at 18:12:26

I like it with the fat guy, gives it a contrast to the single colour of the water and shark...maybe re-work him slightly and make him smaller

lawrence loh

on May 22, 2009 at 22:38:54

Artist

thanks! will consider about it.

stupid otter

on May 23, 2009 at 03:24:58

cool! i like both the shark and the guy.

Mrcoffeebean

on May 23, 2009 at 03:45:02

yap.watch danger behind you!

pickachuz

on May 23, 2009 at 14:32:55

take the fat guy out and it would be AMZING.

Piemaker13th

on May 23, 2009 at 18:09:10

please remove the fat guy

evan3

on May 23, 2009 at 18:29:22

2 designs submitted - Score now!

tidy up the rolls on the fat guy a tad..

tvine

on May 24, 2009 at 02:08:51

Fully support... BTW thanks on U'r support...

simcha123456

on May 24, 2009 at 02:33:22

funny!

Bio-bot 9000

on May 25, 2009 at 13:11:09

nice job!

GingerKitten

on May 26, 2009 at 02:06:14

I agree with others - the shark and water are incredible and gorgeous, but the contrast between in the art of the floater and the shark is unpleasant. Shark = visually appealing; guy = ugly. I'm amused by the about-to-be-eaten concept, just not the art of the guy.

FRICKINAWESOME

on May 26, 2009 at 07:06:00

The guy "floating" on the tee's water surface is the perfect compliment to the shark about to devour him from underneath your tee's color. Like others have said, just change the guy a bit, make him a tad more realistic and similiar to the shark's style, and you got yourself a no-brains print.