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by lawrence loh   
i have rework on this design since my previous submission still got room to improved it. therefore i have come out this new design, hope you all like it.
thestray
thestray on May 21 '09
I wish the guy looked as good as the shark.
GreenRabbit
GreenRabbit on May 21 '09
Yeah, the way you drew the guy ruins this a little.
brentendo
brentendo on May 21 '09
remove the guy, just have the shark. I reckon it looks good enough to just have on its own
Marco Enrico
Marco Enrico on May 22 '09
i think its funny...4





Life is short
HaloGirl
HaloGirl on May 22 '09
I agree with TheStray about the guy.



Huge improvement over your first version. The shark and water are awesome. There's something about the close crop of the shark that really appeals to me - that (without the guy) really large on the shirt could be interesting.
lawrence loh
   lawrence loh on May 22 '09
haha...i guess putting the little fat guy in it would add little funny scene, guess i was wrong. maybe should resubmit it again without the poor fat guy.
radreb
radreb on May 22 '09
shark is awesome.
theevidenceisme
theevidenceisme on May 22 '09
i like the little fat guy
Heavenward Bound
Heavenward Bound on May 22 '09
I like it with the fat guy, gives it a contrast to the single colour of the water and shark...maybe re-work him slightly and make him smaller
lawrence loh
   lawrence loh on May 22 '09
thanks! will consider about it.
stupid otter
stupid otter on May 23 '09
cool! i like both the shark and the guy.

Mrcoffeebean
Mrcoffeebean on May 23 '09
yap.watch danger behind you!
pickachuz
pickachuz on May 23 '09
take the fat guy out and it would be AMZING.

Piemaker13th
Piemaker13th on May 23 '09
please remove the fat guy
evan3
   evan3 on May 23 '09
tidy up the rolls on the fat guy a tad..
tvine
tvine on May 24 '09
Fully support... BTW thanks on U'r support...
simcha123456
simcha123456 on May 24 '09
funny!
Bio-bot 9000
Bio-bot 9000 on May 25 '09
nice job!
GingerKitten
GingerKitten on May 26 '09
I agree with others - the shark and water are incredible and gorgeous, but the contrast between in the art of the floater and the shark is unpleasant. Shark = visually appealing; guy = ugly. I'm amused by the about-to-be-eaten concept, just not the art of the guy.
FRICKINAWESOME
   FRICKINAWESOME on May 26 '09
The guy "floating" on the tee's water surface is the perfect compliment to the shark about to devour him from underneath your tee's color. Like others have said, just change the guy a bit, make him a tad more realistic and similiar to the shark's style, and you got yourself a no-brains print.
CHIPBEEFY
CHIPBEEFY on May 26 '09
^ Ditto
duchess_of_stl
duchess_of_stl on May 26 '09
i would love it if the dude looks as real as the shark. but still an AWESOME DESIGN AND CONCEPT.
_s_a_s_h_
_s_a_s_h_ on May 27 '09
yamm :)
lawrence loh
   lawrence loh on May 27 '09
thanks all the comment and critics! will improve it whenever i can.
CazKing
   CazKing on May 27 '09
awesome design!
yaminivbn
yaminivbn on May 27 '09
hee..heee...Funny...

like it!!



pls check out mine!
asiscortes
asiscortes on May 28 '09
very nice,
DAlb
DAlb on May 28 '09
the guy could use improvement. cool concept though
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Alseter
Alseter on Sep 20 '09
AAAHHHHHA AAHAHAAH....... very cool!!
Alseter
Alseter on Sep 20 '09
AAAHHHHHA AAHAHAAH....... very cool!!
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