after getting feedback I had another go at this one. Hope you guys think its an improvement..... all crit appreciated!

far better!

I love this! You'll have Tim Burton quaking in his boots

loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it... x-small please!

beautiful and creepy

Nice mood i like it 5$

Nice style and detail $$

: ) these would be cool as a set of prints!

thanks guys!

Nice...!!!

This was the more interesting of the 2 hans and gretsel ones. I think u should do a rework on it and re sub and add a mysterious dark castle silhouette (perhaps at the horizon) in the back.. or something else that makes the tee stick out a little bit more from the crowd.