I really like the details on the drawing. But something about the way in balances on the shirt just doesn't work. It cuts the wearer in half. Maybe if you changed it so that the birdladie's hips started at the base of the shirt and then she continued up to chest level, and the bird was held at like centre t-shirt area it might work better on a shirt.
The original image does not show any other parts of the character. It's not necessary to center images in any display, so long as a point is made. Details go astray because I intended on such designs to wrap the shirt. I'm sure however it could be re-alligned a bit nicer. -- As far as the design goes, either you will like it, or you won't. I offer unique; have it, or don't.
I love this design. I only have one critique and that is, it would be even nicer if the character at the bottom were even more off center for a nicer wrap around. Great job, you are very talented!
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