hahah, i loved this slogan when i was rummaging through maltziedan's slogans a while back! While i understand why you went with the futuristic, vaguely Stargate-ish font, it's very hard to read and the slogan is already a bit hard to grasp on its own, so you want to have something that is more streamlined, yet spacey, to bang the point across...maybe also having the beginning and end of the slogan going into a porthole of light like it's being transported would get the point across better. Good stuff at work here tho, fellahs!
About my design
I'm nt entirely if simulated process is possible on dark shirts, but if it's not, i could easily make this halftone fun :D