This is a modified version of my first submission. I took into account suggestions from the community and came up with this design. I hope this one is more up to scratch. All comments are welcome. Thanks :)

Ha, you've got them on the same bed and the creatures look a bit more like they should, but it still needs a little work in my opinion. Firstly, I'm not sure if dressing a pixie as a bee and an angel as a bird really get thte birds and bee point across. Maybe the pixie one, but the angel needs more bird-like qualities. Also, i liked the shadiness of the motel sign/window in the background before. And i think they still need to be glancing at each awkwardly, but i think all the comments have turned it into a different design than you really wanted to do. I think this concept done in a cartoony and goody way would be amazing, but good luck with it, it's getting there!