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really good!
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This makes me think of my teen-age niece. Nice feel to the illustration.
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like the socks! red lips perhaps?
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you misspelled theme.
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alexmdc on May 03 '09 cooool!
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thanks all who vote and comment...keep em comin
@Halogirl: we all have a teen inside us..haha @ clarko: ops sorry...i guess im dumb haha @K for Kool :hmm i go for black because it reflect the sad innocent of her...does that makes sense haahaa. heres my progression at the critique Progress |
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love it! very nice design :)
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naise. like it on white. still liked the scissors.. =p
good job! |
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Ivantobealone on May 03 '09 Fantastic!!
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@ agrimony: haha...not with the scissors talk again...
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I think the black lips are just right. Interesting to see the progression of the critique. I'm glad to see the scissors gone because now her melancholy can be about anything - not just her hair. I like the change in title for the same reason.
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cool illo
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mtths on May 03 '09 that's a lot of hair :-)
like it on blue! |
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buko on May 03 '09 Sweet :)
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Wonderful
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really nice
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Great!
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BubuSam on May 04 '09 Nice
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@halogirl: i like the new title name too...shes pretty yet awkward... which is fine.
thanks all..keep commenting and voting |
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great colors, great style.
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thanks
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reminds me of "her hair" and so many others, but with a lame emo twist. sorry.
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Her hair is awesome, I love the rose petals falling out of it.
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i really love this one!! $5 fo sho
could you please rate mine too? it would mean a lot! http://www.threadless.com/submission/208869/Mommy_why_does_the_rain_come_down |
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wallstreet on May 06 '09 Looks better on white. Nice. ;)
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@girlovesveggies: hmm...i wasn't potraying emo in any way though.
thanks all and do speak your mind out about the design..appreciate it =). |
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5$ =)
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WOW, hope this prints =)
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The progression is awesome
I like your illustration style! Can you please give me your feedback on my stuff! thanks |
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thanks...1 more days left pleas do vote and comment.
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reminds me of e. gorey one of my favs
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i like edward gorey too..=)
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hmm...a bad score....but thanks again for the people who vote and comment and help me in the critques...=)
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I'm liking the idea. My only suggestion is perhaps slightly altering the overall shape of the hair? Meaning starting at the very top going for a fuller 'beehive' then as you proceed towards the face you bring it in a bit then towards the arms you flare it out almost like imagining an octopus sitting on her head. Does that make sense?
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i guess i could keep that in mind....actually i was gonna make the hair shape look more tree like, more rounder...is that ok...idk...but defienately gonna keep working on this.
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Yes, please keep working on this. I'm sad that it didn't score higher.
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that sprout roses everywhere,
like the strange Edward,
shes pretty awkward.
A blend of light hearted design with a little dark them. Remind me of edward scissorshand...a really good movie.