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Submitted on:
May 01 '09
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67 comments
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3.15 out of 5
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Bobzar77
Bobzar77 on May 01 '09
chelly
chelly on May 01 '09
funny and morbid
ginetteginette
   ginetteginette on May 01 '09
hahaha
bunuel
bunuel on May 01 '09
i like the design
but hate the yellow shirt color

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westicles
westicles on May 01 '09
Haha this is great. $5
Nihlus
Nihlus on May 01 '09
Not a big fan of yellow, but it seems to fit this design. Either way, I'd wear this! :D
FreckleTiff
FreckleTiff on May 01 '09
LOL...this is great! $5
Troy Souders
Troy Souders on May 01 '09
funny stuff i love it
that is inappropriate
that is inappropriate on May 01 '09
don't post links to your designs in other people's submissions if you know what's good for you. you're likely to be threadshanked.
Flying Mouse 365
   Flying Mouse 365 on May 01 '09
Nice!
mgill52
mgill52 on May 01 '09
listen to that is inappropriate

but nice concept
Huan-k
Huan-k on May 01 '09
jajajaja...
yeohgh
   yeohgh on May 02 '09
Awesomeeeeeeee idea!!!!!
AdderXYU
AdderXYU on May 02 '09
This is pretty classic
Bio-bot 9000
Bio-bot 9000 on May 02 '09
Great idea, but the fence and house behind it draw attention away from the main subject, especially with so few colors. I think this would be much stronger with just the tree and the tires.
Kaos Kreation
Kaos Kreation on May 02 '09
Made me laugh!
Khol
Khol on May 02 '09
Bio-bot 9000 on May 02 '09
Great idea, but the fence and house behind it draw attention away from the main subject, especially with so few colors. I think this would be much stronger with just the tree and the tires.


I totally agree. And maybe give the tree some depth.
And perhaps a different color pallet? Personally, I'm just not going to wear a shirt that's only yellow and grey.
tangel'd
tangel'd on May 02 '09
Thanks for the comments people...

Why no love for a yellow tshirt? :-(
staffell
staffell on May 02 '09
great!

stylistically it's a bit of a mishmash though, the house hasn't got any solid lines on it and the tree looks a bit scruffy compared to the fence and the tyres.

definitely work on this some more and resub! consistancy!
Krakaboom
   Krakaboom on May 02 '09
Make it look more like this one! I've always been disappointed that Laser Bread's didn't print, so maybe I can buy yours instead!
macdoodle
macdoodle on May 02 '09
i think the whole scene is pretty cool...house included. i love how the neighbor is peeking over the fence like "wtf?". Good design.
Zecca
Zecca on May 02 '09
I wouldn't wear Yellow, but I like the idea! Great :)
sustici
sustici on May 02 '09
hahaha.love it
TangYauHoong
   TangYauHoong on May 02 '09
Very funny!
Rapunzel93
Rapunzel93 on May 02 '09
ROTFL

i personally like that color. you are a very good artist!
Jebs
   Jebs on May 02 '09
ahahah, funny, really! 5
tom550
tom550 on May 02 '09
OMG im taking my tire down now!!!
cool shirt
jax_t
jax_t on May 02 '09
haha classic take on swing man
5
Tadlan
Tadlan on May 02 '09
I love it! I would keep the fence, lose the house, and put it on a black tee...but the idea is very clever, funny, and ironic. I love taking thinks that usually bring images of fun and pleasure and tying them to darker images. Beautiful!
alexmdc
   alexmdc on May 03 '09
cool, I like the simplicity of laser breads a bit more, but still awesome
catalina aguilera
   catalina aguilera on May 03 '09
clever :D
vittoria12
vittoria12 on May 03 '09
interesting audio track
kshuffleton
kshuffleton on May 03 '09
i like it but id like to see a 2 and an 8 somewhere
THEN i would buy this
wotto
   wotto on May 03 '09
Yikes morbid but cool as hell.
HighlandBagpiper
HighlandBagpiper on May 03 '09
Poor wheel, ....funny idea!
Trash-can
Trash-can on May 03 '09
hehehehehe...now this is brilliant!

Great idea and seriously cool illustration!

Okay, maybe you could make some small tweaks. Personally I don't think you need to lose the house and fence. My only beef is with the fence really. Right now it's slightly angled and it might be better straightened. I'm thinking it could use a other tone also...it blends into the tree a little. If you lose the fence you lose that tire peaking over it which adds a great touch to this image. Anyway I'm babbling, even in it's current state I'd buy it. One of the more originally and well executed ideas I've seen here so far.
badbasilisk
   badbasilisk on May 04 '09
haha - YES!
Mr.Y
Mr.Y on May 04 '09
I like it!
http://www.threadless.com/critique/42910/I_believe_u_can_fly
theoptiknerve
theoptiknerve on May 04 '09
This is great, just great.
jaypaulo
jaypaulo on May 04 '09
Great idea!
The audio track and the title are funny too!
ukfswmart
ukfswmart on May 04 '09
Olive or sand = 5$
Miss Mayhem
Miss Mayhem on May 04 '09
Hahahaha loving the title too. :D
Arrow08
   Arrow08 on May 04 '09
haha great!
SheyOliver
SheyOliver on May 04 '09
oh man! i am not one to go for the "one-liners" but this is excellent. TOUCHE!
Brow-Raiser
Brow-Raiser on May 04 '09
LOL! ^-^
Bluelunar
Bluelunar on May 04 '09
Lol! It's very funny! :D

Please vote for mine if you have a minute. Thanks!
luc415
luc415 on May 04 '09
good stuff.
apy
   apy on May 04 '09
ahahah!
Tikimasters
Tikimasters on May 05 '09
lol there are a lot of really funny subs today. This is no exception. You've given the grief stricken tire the perfect expression/stance.
tangel'd
tangel'd on May 05 '09
Thanks for everyones support . Let's hope all these positives turn into a print! Thanks for stopping by...
ArtByAlysia
ArtByAlysia on May 05 '09
HaHaHa. GREAT JOB!!
bobs_maker
bobs_maker on May 05 '09
Bob thinks this tshirt is supertastic.
phillydesigner
   phillydesigner on May 05 '09
great!
TheW
TheW on May 05 '09
hahaha. funny.
ivejustquitsmoking
   ivejustquitsmoking on May 05 '09
nice title too
wallstreet
   wallstreet on May 06 '09
This is a very fun design! Nice. ;)
SuperRyan
SuperRyan on May 06 '09
quite funny! I love it!
Mitch_Mitch_Mitchell
Mitch_Mitch_Mitchell on May 06 '09
You totally destroyed that happy childhood memory.
Friendly Fire
Friendly Fire on May 06 '09
well done
FRICKINAWESOME
   FRICKINAWESOME on May 07 '09
Yeah, get rid of the shadows or at get the sun setting behind them to elongate the shadow to make it more creepy looking and evocative of the feel of the scene. Love all the little details and actually dig it more than laser bread's take, which is saying a lot! Love the nosy neighbor as well peeking over the fence.

4.
caki25
caki25 on May 07 '09
WooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooW!!!
I like idea!!! It is super!!!

Please check out:
http://www.threadless.com/submission/208363/Ice_Cubex
DonkeyKongD
DonkeyKongD on May 07 '09
don't like the yellow that much.
xx0murph0xx
xx0murph0xx on May 07 '09
i love it
LouiseDazo
LouiseDazo on May 08 '09
hahahaha! you'll definitely get a good reaction from this :-) nice!
kaiayame
kaiayame on May 08 '09
omg love it XD
thepants
thepants on May 08 '09
Love it as is! Print! 5$
jesserface
jesserface on May 08 '09
This is great! sooooooooo creative! I like this concept dude! you got my 5$

can I have some feedback on my stuff as well? thanks
4 days later
tangel'd
tangel'd on May 13 '09
Well this didn't get picked... Thanks for everyones support!
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