Why am I so alone?
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Jun 15 '04
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lol!!! GREAT idea... not liking the text how it is though. maybe smaller and in a word balloon.
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I'd say lose the text. If you keep it, change the type face and make it relate to the illustration of the figure more directly. There isn't really a dialog between them right now.
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I see how the text are too removed from the figure.
What if I use a thought bubble? Should the figure have more detail? To be honest, I used very little time making it. Thnx for the feedback. |
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you may change the typo
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...because you're wearing a yellow hazard suit and toting a machine gun.
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text overstates the case, but the graphic is great and subtle
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kudos scs.
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I think a thought bubble would definitely unite the picture and text. You could do a little more detail on the figure, perhaps some lines to differentiate the arms from the rest of the body. Also, could you reduce the text down to "alone" ?
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love it. maybe just understate the text a little more, so it doesn't overpower the image. but i love this XD so smart. thought bubble would be perfect. whatever you do, don't remove the text, it;s really funny!
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love the concept, but not the design… mostly the type and placement.
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guy: "why am i so alone?"
everyone else: "because you SUCK" |
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yes SUCK
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Heehee, you said SUCK!
Since everybody seem to dislike the font, any suggestions for a good font that would work? C'mon, don't be shy. I'll appreciate all the feedback I can get. |
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you need about 2 years of practice
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