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shes's in fashion.

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Apr 17 '09
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hollysharpe

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by hollysharpe
A colourful montage of fashion illustration. My favourite type of illustration :) c'est tout.
VirginiaPrettyFlower
VirginiaPrettyFlower on Apr 18 '09
I really like this, except for the sentence in the middle, " She's in fashion. Other than that. It's really lovely, I give it a 4! :]
dioBrando
dioBrando on Apr 18 '09
Without lines will be better...



Also critique mine plz
B 7
   B 7 on Apr 18 '09
yeah lose the text, and it's a lovely lovely design
travlinggirl4ever
travlinggirl4ever on Apr 18 '09
love the design. I agree the text should go. But everything else is really great!
Maxixen
Maxixen on Apr 19 '09
tot so with all the above :)

pls score mine pls, thanks
hollysharpe
hollysharpe on Apr 19 '09
thanks so much for your comments! It is really so useful just to get some feedback! This is my first design up here, so I don't exactly expect it to get printed, but I'm guna keep on trying until one does!

thanks again guys! :)
sarahbalboa
sarahbalboa on Apr 19 '09
this is the best choccy balboa i ever seen!!
ultraripe
ultraripe on Apr 19 '09
nice illustration!
rachelsamantha
rachelsamantha on Apr 19 '09
a striking design with some really strong individual illustrations within :)
Bobo aka Child
Bobo aka Child on Apr 19 '09
nice style !
jessicalee23
jessicalee23 on Apr 19 '09
I like it :) and I like the txt but maybe in another font, and i really like the lines and the colours u've used...good luck!!
sophiejac
sophiejac on Apr 19 '09
tooot toot!
zzkang
zzkang on Apr 20 '09
very nice!!
Straight Illest
Straight Illest on Apr 20 '09
5 for sure, i think u shoulda worked on the font choice for the phrase because it looks like u put alot of time into the design and the words were the last thing that was quickly added, remember typography is just as important as the visuals themselves, but great job
hollysharpe
hollysharpe on Apr 20 '09
thanks very much, and ye, you are so right, typography is something kinda out of my depth! so i should prob just leave it for now! i have a few more designs along the same lines as this, I am now thinking I will submit them for critique first and then decide whether to include the text or not... appreciate the comments!! :)
Sownup
Sownup on Apr 21 '09
5 for 5, I really like the design, and careful use of colour.. The illustration is top shelf and the flow of line resonates through the piece.
baileyb
baileyb on Apr 22 '09
Hey Holly, It's beautiful, your drawing is really strong and impactful but I agree with the other guys...ditch the text. I would maybe swap the turquoise lines over to the left hand corner to balance out the black lines at the top. I would maybe make them an outline too as opposed to a thick stripe. I really like the use of colour against the black inky lines though. Well done you missy x
robsonborges
   robsonborges on Apr 24 '09
good job 5$
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