shes's in fashion.
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1030 days ago
Submitted on:
Apr 17 '09
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19 comments
Average score:
1.74 from 597 votes
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I really like this, except for the sentence in the middle, " She's in fashion. Other than that. It's really lovely, I give it a 4! :]
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B 7 on Apr 18 '09 yeah lose the text, and it's a lovely lovely design
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love the design. I agree the text should go. But everything else is really great!
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tot so with all the above :)
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thanks so much for your comments! It is really so useful just to get some feedback! This is my first design up here, so I don't exactly expect it to get printed, but I'm guna keep on trying until one does!
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this is the best choccy balboa i ever seen!!
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nice illustration!
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a striking design with some really strong individual illustrations within :)
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nice style !
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I like it :) and I like the txt but maybe in another font, and i really like the lines and the colours u've used...good luck!!
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tooot toot!
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very nice!!
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5 for sure, i think u shoulda worked on the font choice for the phrase because it looks like u put alot of time into the design and the words were the last thing that was quickly added, remember typography is just as important as the visuals themselves, but great job
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thanks very much, and ye, you are so right, typography is something kinda out of my depth! so i should prob just leave it for now! i have a few more designs along the same lines as this, I am now thinking I will submit them for critique first and then decide whether to include the text or not... appreciate the comments!! :)
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5 for 5, I really like the design, and careful use of colour.. The illustration is top shelf and the flow of line resonates through the piece.
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Hey Holly, It's beautiful, your drawing is really strong and impactful but I agree with the other guys...ditch the text. I would maybe swap the turquoise lines over to the left hand corner to balance out the black lines at the top. I would maybe make them an outline too as opposed to a thick stripe. I really like the use of colour against the black inky lines though. Well done you missy x
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robsonborges on Apr 24 '09 good job 5$
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