I just hate city caos.... turn building into trees

First score!

And comment!

I like it.

I really like the design and the colors but the spacing in the letters makes it confusing to read. At least, that's what I think. I think you could make it a little wider (the design part that the words are on), that way you could make "another" a complete word and work out the top part of the words, since the



LET'SMA

KETHIS



part kind of throws me off.



Also, maybe you could move the design down a bit, maybe to where the "Let's" line is aligned a bit to where the sleeve cuts off.



Again, I really like your use of colors and the concept, I just think it needs a bit more work on the spacing in the words and the positioning.

LE

T'S

MAK

ETHI

SHAR

DERT

OREA

D.

I like the coloring and the letter shapes. Very cool!

I like the coloring and the letter shapes. Very cool!

beautiful design!

i like this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! fantastic!!!!

very beautiful design...i like this

bellissima, dove posso trovarla?

comments are welcome!! positive or negative...

thanks to all that vote for me!

al piccolo agostino piace molto questa maglietta :D

e bravo carlo.....

la indosserei con piacere, la regalerei ad un caro amico convinta di farlo contanto/a...per cui..è ok!!very cool!

Messaggio ricevuto!!!

that would require a lot of public petitioning and negotiations with civic planners.

Very nice, but kind of hard to read. Maybe if you put something between words to mark them as separate?



If you have time:

http://www.threadless.com/profile/910639/AltheaK/critiques

Nice idea!



Also critique my design plz

for Bio-bot 9000: You're right, but someone says "I have a dream"... Man is suffocating himself with concrete....everywhere. In future we all will pay for this... unfortunately a shirt can't make the difference but can make people think..I hope!

I really like the lettering, that's a big part of the design and to widen it so each word can be on it's own line will just take away from the entire image.

I just don't like what it actually says... ;)

Please don't leave your link on other people's designs, thanks. It's inconsiderate.

why?

nice design!

thank 4 rate my design and coment...

I love this shirt...It's simply and smartly nice

loveburnhate on Apr 19 '09

why?



Because it's rude and inconsiderate. Comments on a design should be reserved for that artist's design, not your design. They're not a tool for your promotion, show some respect.

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