bad.

actually, i like it o-k. its very different, very original. looks like some crazy dream you had, and made into a design.



shame i cant zoom in,

also a HUGE shame you dont have enough contrast in there. its such an interesting design, with all sorts of detail... but it just looks like one big blur, and instead of being a really wacky original design, it turns out to look like a blurry blob of a stone wall.



experiment with stronger colors, maybe play around with 3 or 4 even. try another shirt color, as well.

too light

I like it just the way it is.

I like how it is all pale and somewhat sparatic. I like the messy unstable lines.

agree w vwoop on this one. lovely design, need to be able to see it.

id buy it just the way it is

yey radical dude :)

It's so much more inspired than most of the shirts on here (cars anybody?) I dig it. I also like the fact that it's very spectral and dreamlike. At the very least, it's a good start.

absolutely beautiful

Cool! Something different!

i'd like it more if the colors didn't say 1952 formica

Vwoop: stick it inside until it stops all of the ideas that keep pouring out of your ass.



i like this, but is it cream or yellow? my screen won't let up.

Like it. Think the top 2/3rds works better on its own.

I was at first upset to see the 'lack of contrast' criticized because I initially responded really positively to the gentle qualities of the color scheme with those lovely lines, but...when I look BETWEEN the shirt and the zoom, I admit that the (unintended) highlight of the white really does lend something powerful in the moment that my eyes pass over it. The illusion of added contrast that it gives is a really positive one.



So, if you do feel like working more with this shirt, I might suggest possibly using some white (particularly as a sort of backdrop, as you're using the gray, or perhaps in highlights) into the design because it could give your lines a bit more life, but in a way that wouldn't at all work against the fey colorway that corresponds so nicely to the graphic.



I'm excited to see more things from you!

i like it, i dont know what it is but its nice. perhaps a different shirt color. i like white.