if you are gonna be using the drips there.... you should work on them a little bit... try using "drips" or at least find some that you think are done well and find out why they are working...
i really like these designs and i think you could still bring them to another level
This is a winner. Placement isn't the most favourable but I'd buy this. Do another version with an off centre placement and make the drips more drippy, even make one astray like it skipped down the shirt abit.
This is the best of the three, but change the color I think. Not sure which colors would be the best, but the wonderful designers at threadless would know best. I think it would be best a little smaller, but keep it centered and keep those drips there; don't exxagerate them. Really good.
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