Pride
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1143 days ago
Submitted on:
Apr 09 '09
Comments:
16 comments
Average score:
1.54 from 544 votes
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no clue what the back of the shirt says. :(
I also have no idea what the thing is on my front. maybe some close ups would be helpful :) |
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I don't think the placement of the letters on the back is very good, it'd be hard to see and doesn't flow well. Also what's on the front is that a wing? I do think it has a beautiful gradient, perhaps a little more fiddling with the design and placement though.
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Guessing this is the fall of Lucifer. . . . .
Love the concept, but I want the design to grab my interest more. |
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yea it is the fall of lucifer. I didn't mean to submit this one in the running....I had a slightly reworked one but accidently put this one in the running. So please just vote for this one for now and maybe you'll see the newer one in the future!! thanks for the support anyways!
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The illustration looks good, but the presentation/placement could be worked on :) My first guess would have been icarus. lol
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interesting ... i do need to see the detail before i make a definitive decision, cause at this point I cannot read it ... is the creature on the front supposed to be a griffith or a fallen angel? Is the head missing? ... from what i can tell it looks like a good start
thanks for commenting on mine |
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i love this its awsome!!!! 5$
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all rigth, thanks for your comments!
all rigth, i'll be tunned for the next one good idea put text on back, next time put a close up of the text. |
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awesome.... : )
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thanks for the comment man! i love the idea of this one, the arrangement of "Lucifer" on the back is a little confusing. i think you should keep the falling idea of the letters, but bunch them together a little more. i like the design on the front, too. it's hard to see at first, but if you put a little more detail or maybe some outlines, lucifer's transformation from angel to demon would be more defined. Good luck!
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IŽd like to see the last version. This one is unfinished...
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