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Scoring finished:
238 days ago
Submitted on:
Apr 08 '09
Scored by:
577 people
Comments:
63 comments
Final average score:
2.93 out of 5
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Charlie_M
Rework of an earlier sub.

Would be simulated proccess.
Piemaker13th
Piemaker13th on Apr 08 '09
this is very interesting. i love looking at it. nice job
Ivantobealone
   Ivantobealone on Apr 08 '09
Sweet!!!
UP.
UP. on Apr 08 '09
very nice, mayeb the body of the girlz is a bit strange but...
nice mood and details
UP.
alexmdc
   alexmdc on Apr 08 '09
looks awesome!
HaloGirl
HaloGirl on Apr 08 '09
I thought this looked familiar. I like your changes, especially the water.
Charlie_M
Charlie_M on Apr 08 '09
Thanks guys!
laio
laio on Apr 08 '09
very nice man! really!
Wildorbeast
Wildorbeast on Apr 08 '09
Very Nice :D
angela.scott
angela.scott on Apr 08 '09
ooohh i like it!
ben chen
   ben chen on Apr 08 '09
nice
rossmat8
rossmat8 on Apr 08 '09
This looks amazing on the shirt 5
Santo76
Santo76 on Apr 08 '09
so cool!
alecto
alecto on Apr 09 '09
LOVE!!! $5
badbasilisk
   badbasilisk on Apr 09 '09
much better now! 5!
arlee
arlee on Apr 09 '09
wow this is awesome!
uselessprogress
uselessprogress on Apr 09 '09
I.. LOVE.. this.

The colors are great, the composition is lovely.
katapawl
katapawl on Apr 09 '09
Wow! Amazing!
Charlie_M
Charlie_M on Apr 09 '09
Oh wow, thanks for all the comments:)
wotto
   wotto on Apr 09 '09
cool
garciagirl
garciagirl on Apr 09 '09
Wow, neat!
giantworm
giantworm on Apr 09 '09
very very cool!
boostr29
   boostr29 on Apr 09 '09
looks great...definitely a lot better than the original...well done. $5
HorsefaceDee
HorsefaceDee on Apr 09 '09
wonderful
Wonderlove
Wonderlove on Apr 09 '09
Nice.
The refracted light effect is very well done.
5$.
Charlie_M
Charlie_M on Apr 09 '09
Thanks!
patience.
patience. on Apr 09 '09
wow..i'm wanting this. very nice.
OneRedRocket
OneRedRocket on Apr 09 '09
This T-shirt would look so much better with the Blue wood background
FRICKINAWESOME
   FRICKINAWESOME on Apr 10 '09
Sexcellent use of the negative space of the tee, and I like that the background conjures up a confined fishbowl, the endless ocean and a glorious sunset all in one.
Willy510
Willy510 on Apr 10 '09
nice one!
Charlie_M
Charlie_M on Apr 10 '09
Frickinawesome, that is excactly what I was going for!

Cheers guys!
milanorain
milanorain on Apr 11 '09
this is great! like the first, LOVE this!! your score is totally gonna be higher! rock on!
Charlie_M
Charlie_M on Apr 11 '09
I hope so! Thanks:)
quister
   quister on Apr 11 '09
Awesome work, riveting! $5
evan3
   evan3 on Apr 11 '09
very intriguing...
4
CazKing
CazKing on Apr 11 '09
nice stuff!
krokun
krokun on Apr 12 '09
Liking it !
opifan64
   opifan64 on Apr 12 '09
very striking! nicely done
Charlie_M
Charlie_M on Apr 12 '09
Thanks!
ounom
   ounom on Apr 12 '09
Really nice!
Bio-bot 9000
Bio-bot 9000 on Apr 12 '09
nice!
ferfo
ferfo on Apr 13 '09
$5'd the old one, $5ing the new one
Peters not economically viable
The only problem I can see is that (to me) the large cluster of hair facing her looks kinda tentaclish (tentacle-esque?). Did I just make that word up? It looking like that isn't necessarily bad or good it just took me a few seconds to figrue out what was going on. But yeah, like every other comment on here- this is a great use of negative space that would really stand out on a t-shirt.
bhoomika
bhoomika on Apr 13 '09
Woah ! that looks really cool ! $5
Assault
Assault on Apr 13 '09
I really like this, but I'd agree with the clump of hair to the right, and I just kinda think the background would have looked nicer as more of a cone shape, as if the light was shining down from above the water. Great design though, lots of life in the hair!
YesterdaysRamen
YesterdaysRamen on Apr 13 '09
AWESOME $5
buko
   buko on Apr 13 '09
amazing 5$
David Messer
David Messer on Apr 13 '09
great!
Charlie_M
Charlie_M on Apr 14 '09
Thanks guys!

I see what you mean with the hair.
viniani
viniani on Apr 14 '09
5$$$$$
tiffa34
tiffa34 on Apr 14 '09
Nice!
The Paper Crane
   The Paper Crane on Apr 14 '09
A beauty!
CaitlinRheni
CaitlinRheni on Apr 14 '09
I love it! I'd definitely wear this.

Can you go to my page and score my critique? I'd appreciate it.
Peters not economically viable
..and I don't know if it's been mentioned before but the the kind of starry night/light piercing the water background creates the perfect mood for the rest of the design.
caiosandesign
caiosandesign on Apr 14 '09
Really nice!!
mgl23
mgl23 on Apr 14 '09
great!!
ndikol
   ndikol on Apr 14 '09
wow so cool :D
SuperRyan
SuperRyan on Apr 14 '09
Really nice colors and I love the silhouette work!
Mosquito88
Mosquito88 on Apr 15 '09
beautifull!
BubuSam
   BubuSam on Apr 15 '09
Nice work!
mr spiers
mr spiers on Apr 15 '09
wow, really nice, great improvements, certainly a 5
Johnny Baboon
   Johnny Baboon on Apr 15 '09
looking good
ArikaGranger
ArikaGranger on Apr 15 '09
oooh thats cooly :D
Roxieoc2
Roxieoc2 on Apr 15 '09
Looks awesome!
HaloGirl
HaloGirl on Apr 15 '09
Decent score, but I would have thought it would be higher.
2 days later
Charlie_M
Charlie_M on Apr 18 '09
2.93. I'll take that. It's not excactly the most exciting design.
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