Weird...I kinda like it, but I kinda hate it. I can't explain.

PLEASE TRY... IF YOU WILL

i like it but not sure if it'd look better without the XXXX?

Is the xxxxx his sword?

BINGO¡

i think the hair gets to flat on the top right side of the head and makes it look misshapen and i think the eyes are just a bit high on the face giving it slightly strange proportions, but i got the xxxx/sword thing right away

Looks cool, but center it in the chest. I like the colors.

keep this just the way it is, and in these colours - nice !
I'd totally wear this :D

THANKS 2 EVERYONE 4 THE COMMENTS...
ABOUT THE DRAWING ON THE CHEST, I TRIED IT BEFORE BUT IT DIDN'T LOOK TOO COOL.
GRACIAS.

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