The Masterplan
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Submitted on:
Apr 03 '09
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2.56 from 732 votes
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Ivantobealone on Apr 03 '09 Nice!!!
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boostr29 on Apr 03 '09 hehe...cute! smart rats! :D
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great idea :) 5$$
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i like it but i feel like the cats paw gets lost maybe if it was a darker color. But I think that this is cool
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I agree with duhrockr. I really like this but I had a hard time distinguishing that it was the cat's paw.
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Great one! Funny stuff
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walmazan on Apr 03 '09 great work mate! $5, i love it
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phillydesigner on Apr 03 '09 great!!!!
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xiaobaosg on Apr 03 '09 Cool! love the details of those rats!!
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robsonborges on Apr 03 '09 muito bom!!!!!
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alexmdc on Apr 03 '09 wasome work!
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Great work on the details! $5
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ginetteginette on Apr 03 '09 it took me soooo much time to finally see the cat paw. definitely not the best colours picked for him :/ and it really doesn't help the punchline.
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rodrigobhz on Apr 03 '09 |
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baumer5 on Apr 03 '09 cool after i realized that wasn't a cat turd
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Too small to see the mice or whatever
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hahahhaha, this is too funny :]
5$! |
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i love cats, yet i must say this is sooooo funny!
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kooky love on Apr 03 '09 GREAT $5
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Awesome!
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nice concept. I couldn't see the paw.
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oooooooh, i couldn't see the paw for a while. just def. be outlined or different color...but great concept and the rest is awesome! 5
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rodrigobhz on Apr 04 '09 |
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I can see the cat paw perfectly
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ginetteginette on Apr 04 '09 yes! @ grey cat paw
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haha!!
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Chengui on Apr 05 '09 Hilarious! My suggestion would be to take out the "masterplan" paper altogether. It's not adding anything to the punchline for me and the writing is too prominent. The pen is enough to show that the mice planned the whole thing I think. Great idea!
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mreisel on Apr 05 '09 Great work as usual! Thanks so much for scoring/commenting on my cat design! It is greatly appreciated!
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FRICKINAWESOME on Apr 05 '09 I agree, it's a bit too detail-heavy for the final joke to really catch on, and a bit sad when you finally realize the cat is slowly dying in quicksand! Take this from a guy who uts too many details into the idea so it convolutes the main impact, maybe make the quicksand joke more obvious and just show the trap being made or finished, without the cat being caught and slowly sufficating. hehehe. I like the gewneral looney toons-ish idea, it just needs some massaging.
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badbasilisk on Apr 06 '09 nice!
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It took me a time to see the cat and get it right ...
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I like it!
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love the joke, but took me too long to find it (even in the revision where I was looking for it...not sure how to fix that). would've loved to see the top of the cats head with an eyeball or two just going under the sand. either way, very creative! LOVE the celebrating mice!
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Arrow08 on Apr 06 '09 haha clever!
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Chengui on Apr 05 '09 Hilarious! My suggestion would be to take out the "masterplan" paper altogether. It's not adding anything to the punchline for me and the writing is too prominent. The pen is enough to show that the mice planned the whole thing I think. Great idea!
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Ahahaha! Truly cute and funny! :)
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Santo76 on Apr 06 '09 I love it, specially the mice characters. I agree the paw needs to be more noticeable.
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A little too much going on in my opinion.
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Like it way better with the grey paw... I agree abouth the master plan... The card that says "reserved for Mr. Cat" is enought to incriminate the mice.
... never knew mice could spell so well..... |
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rodrigobhz on Apr 06 '09 those are the brazilian mice. they're smart. they can spell in another language tho. better than me, as you can see :)
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the jerrys killed tom doubt that
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herky on Apr 06 '09 terrific characters!
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Very nice. But the hammer looks flat.
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TangYauHoong on Apr 06 '09 Very cute design:)
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i much prefer the grey paw & agree about getting rid of the "masterplan" paper.
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ounom on Apr 08 '09 nice details!
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great idea, bad execution. I couldn't even see the claw for about 20 seconds
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rodrigobhz on Apr 08 '09 ^Thank you, I love your designs too!
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I like it!!!
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ratkiss on Apr 25 '09 I missed this.
I love the wee rats. |
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