Hilarious! My suggestion would be to take out the "masterplan" paper altogether. It's not adding anything to the punchline for me and the writing is too prominent. The pen is enough to show that the mice planned the whole thing I think. Great idea!
I agree, it's a bit too detail-heavy for the final joke to really catch on, and a bit sad when you finally realize the cat is slowly dying in quicksand! Take this from a guy who uts too many details into the idea so it convolutes the main impact, maybe make the quicksand joke more obvious and just show the trap being made or finished, without the cat being caught and slowly sufficating. hehehe. I like the gewneral looney toons-ish idea, it just needs some massaging.
love the joke, but took me too long to find it (even in the revision where I was looking for it...not sure how to fix that). would've loved to see the top of the cats head with an eyeball or two just going under the sand. either way, very creative! LOVE the celebrating mice!
Chengui on Apr 05 '09 Hilarious! My suggestion would be to take out the "masterplan" paper altogether. It's not adding anything to the punchline for me and the writing is too prominent. The pen is enough to show that the mice planned the whole thing I think. Great idea!
Like it way better with the grey paw... I agree abouth the master plan... The card that says "reserved for Mr. Cat" is enought to incriminate the mice.
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rodrigobhz
Team work for the win! :)
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Ivantobealone
Nice!!!
boostr29
hehe...cute! smart rats! :D
genkiGab
great idea :) 5$$
duhrockr
i like it but i feel like the cats paw gets lost maybe if it was a darker color. But I think that this is cool
epcrow
I agree with duhrockr. I really like this but I had a hard time distinguishing that it was the cat's paw.
garciagirl
Great one! Funny stuff
walmazan
great work mate! $5, i love it
phillydesigner
great!!!!
xiaobaosg
Cool! love the details of those rats!!
robsonborges
muito bom!!!!!
alexmdc
wasome work!
fat1
Great work on the details! $5
ginetteginette
it took me soooo much time to finally see the cat paw. definitely not the best colours picked for him :/ and it really doesn't help the punchline.
rodrigobhz
Damn you, monitor color calibration! :/
Better this way?
baumer5
cool after i realized that wasn't a cat turd
12bsilling
Too small to see the mice or whatever
ohhabbyy
hahahhaha, this is too funny :]
5$!
nanica
i love cats, yet i must say this is sooooo funny!
kooky love
GREAT $5
Le Coma
Takes too long to read it all and get it.
westicles
Awesome!
Illustr8r
nice concept. I couldn't see the paw.
milanorain
oooooooh, i couldn't see the paw for a while. just def. be outlined or different color...but great concept and the rest is awesome! 5
rodrigobhz
So, if I change of the cat paw you guys give me a 5$? :P
DIFFERENT COLOR
Thanks for the comments!
maluu
I can see the cat paw perfectly
ginetteginette
yes! @ grey cat paw
bhoomika
haha!!
Chengui
Hilarious! My suggestion would be to take out the "masterplan" paper altogether. It's not adding anything to the punchline for me and the writing is too prominent. The pen is enough to show that the mice planned the whole thing I think. Great idea!
mreisel
Great work as usual! Thanks so much for scoring/commenting on my cat design! It is greatly appreciated!
FRICKINAWESOME
I agree, it's a bit too detail-heavy for the final joke to really catch on, and a bit sad when you finally realize the cat is slowly dying in quicksand! Take this from a guy who uts too many details into the idea so it convolutes the main impact, maybe make the quicksand joke more obvious and just show the trap being made or finished, without the cat being caught and slowly sufficating. hehehe. I like the gewneral looney toons-ish idea, it just needs some massaging.
badbasilisk
nice!
Malurocks
It took me a time to see the cat and get it right ...
loveburnhate
I like it!
thepants
love the joke, but took me too long to find it (even in the revision where I was looking for it...not sure how to fix that). would've loved to see the top of the cats head with an eyeball or two just going under the sand. either way, very creative! LOVE the celebrating mice!
Arrow08
haha clever!
applegary
Chengui on Apr 05 '09 Hilarious! My suggestion would be to take out the "masterplan" paper altogether. It's not adding anything to the punchline for me and the writing is too prominent. The pen is enough to show that the mice planned the whole thing I think. Great idea!
EXACTLY my thoughts!
onaricegurl
Ahahaha! Truly cute and funny! :)
Santo76
I love it, specially the mice characters. I agree the paw needs to be more noticeable.
PaulWein
A little too much going on in my opinion.
emkovar
Like it way better with the grey paw... I agree abouth the master plan... The card that says "reserved for Mr. Cat" is enought to incriminate the mice.
... never knew mice could spell so well.....
rodrigobhz
those are the brazilian mice. they're smart. they can spell in another language tho. better than me, as you can see :)
Japanese for Life
the jerrys killed tom doubt that
herky
terrific characters!
casenbina
Very nice. But the hammer looks flat.
TangYauHoong
Very cute design:)
arlee
i much prefer the grey paw & agree about getting rid of the "masterplan" paper.
ounom
nice details!
Kontroknock
great idea, bad execution. I couldn't even see the claw for about 20 seconds
rodrigobhz
^Thank you, I love your designs too!
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