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The Masterplan

by rodrigobhz

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Submitted by rodrigobhz on March 28, 2009

Team work for the win! :)



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boostr29

hehe...cute! smart rats! :D

genkiGab

great idea :) 5$$

duhrockr

i like it but i feel like the cats paw gets lost maybe if it was a darker color. But I think that this is cool

epcrow

I agree with duhrockr. I really like this but I had a hard time distinguishing that it was the cat's paw.

garciagirl

Great one! Funny stuff

walmazan
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great work mate! $5, i love it

xiaobaosg
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Cool! love the details of those rats!!

fat1

Great work on the details! $5

ginetteginette

it took me soooo much time to finally see the cat paw. definitely not the best colours picked for him :/ and it really doesn't help the punchline.

baumer5

cool after i realized that wasn't a cat turd

12bsilling

Too small to see the mice or whatever

ohhabbyy

hahahhaha, this is too funny :]
5$!

nanica

i love cats, yet i must say this is sooooo funny!

Le Coma

Takes too long to read it all and get it.

Illustr8r

nice concept. I couldn't see the paw.

milanorain

oooooooh, i couldn't see the paw for a while. just def. be outlined or different color...but great concept and the rest is awesome! 5

rodrigobhz
rodrigobhz profile pic Artist

So, if I change of the cat paw you guys give me a 5$? :P

DIFFERENT COLOR

Thanks for the comments!

maluu

I can see the cat paw perfectly

bhoomika

haha!!

Chengui

Hilarious! My suggestion would be to take out the "masterplan" paper altogether. It's not adding anything to the punchline for me and the writing is too prominent. The pen is enough to show that the mice planned the whole thing I think. Great idea!

mreisel

Great work as usual! Thanks so much for scoring/commenting on my cat design! It is greatly appreciated!

FRICKINAWESOME

I agree, it's a bit too detail-heavy for the final joke to really catch on, and a bit sad when you finally realize the cat is slowly dying in quicksand! Take this from a guy who uts too many details into the idea so it convolutes the main impact, maybe make the quicksand joke more obvious and just show the trap being made or finished, without the cat being caught and slowly sufficating. hehehe. I like the gewneral looney toons-ish idea, it just needs some massaging.

Malurocks

It took me a time to see the cat and get it right ...

thepants

love the joke, but took me too long to find it (even in the revision where I was looking for it...not sure how to fix that). would've loved to see the top of the cats head with an eyeball or two just going under the sand. either way, very creative! LOVE the celebrating mice!

Arrow08

haha clever!

applegary

Chengui on Apr 05 '09 Hilarious! My suggestion would be to take out the "masterplan" paper altogether. It's not adding anything to the punchline for me and the writing is too prominent. The pen is enough to show that the mice planned the whole thing I think. Great idea!

EXACTLY my thoughts!

onaricegurl

Ahahaha! Truly cute and funny! :)

Santo76
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I love it, specially the mice characters. I agree the paw needs to be more noticeable.

PaulWein

A little too much going on in my opinion.

emkovar

Like it way better with the grey paw... I agree abouth the master plan... The card that says "reserved for Mr. Cat" is enought to incriminate the mice.

... never knew mice could spell so well.....

rodrigobhz
rodrigobhz profile pic Artist

those are the brazilian mice. they're smart. they can spell in another language tho. better than me, as you can see :)

herky

terrific characters!

casenbina

Very nice. But the hammer looks flat.

arlee

i much prefer the grey paw & agree about getting rid of the "masterplan" paper.

ounom

nice details!

Kontroknock

great idea, bad execution. I couldn't even see the claw for about 20 seconds

rodrigobhz
rodrigobhz profile pic Artist

^Thank you, I love your designs too!

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