My last cigarette
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Submitted on:
Apr 01 '09
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1.42 from 791 votes
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I think it would be a lot better without the frame of the picture - incorporate it into the shirt a little more, maybe extend out the tiles so that they fade out... that'd be neat. :]
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I think this is cool!!...maybe because i love polaroid...anyway, great work!
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i think the polaroid frame kind of gives a restrictive feeling, kind of boxed up, so i agree with BigOrangeStar. the concept is cool though!
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yeah, drop the whole picture frame and text...just let it be the smoldering cigarette in the urinal with the name of the shirt left as is. i love the drawing though, and think it could be great, but with changes.
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I'm usually the first person to say "LOSE THE FRAMES", but in he case of this being a polaroid, I think it works as part of the design. Having said that, a bit of drop shadow or curving up at the bottom could do wonders for the pic, lest it looks too flat. Any shirt with a urinal on, I'll have to vote at least a 4 though.
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lose the frame, lose the concept. the polaroid frame is great. i like it!
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" "LOSE THE FRAMES", but in he case of this being a polaroid, I think it works as part of the design."
" the polaroid frame is great." no no NO. It is NOT a polaroid frame. It is a tasteless placement of a square meant to EMULATE a polaroid frame but totally devoid of any aspect of instant photography at all. NOT okay. |
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o damn.
its an actual scanned polaroid frame. now i feel like an idiot. |
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Hey guys....what's the problem with polaroids?!?!
I think I know at least 50 people and many more who would like to buy this T-shirt!!! |
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i actually like the frame. im normally against boxed up designs but i think this design won't work as well without the polaroid frame :)
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but i dont think a lot of non smokers would buy the shirt though
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The design itself is nice, lines are clean, and ideas is good, but I personally don't like anything related to smoking. This is just my opinion, no offense.
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love polaroid. nice work.
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like it on red.
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Like the idea...better without frame!
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Try following BigOrangeStar's advice and see what it looks like. I think it could be really cool.
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