yeah, the colour doesn't do it for me, but the design is great, but then, i suppose i just don't like yellow shirts.
maybe you could alter the colour scheme? I could see it becoming more 'miliary'-ish, yknow: reds, greys, blacks and yellows/oranges - the wings remind me of a medal ^^
somewhere a totem pole is broken and laying on the ground because this guy left it for a better life. love the contrast of his smooth lines vs. the background. nice work!
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