im pretty sure her head neads to be quite a lot bigger....

you like that face a lot, don't you?

a face on a shirt... ???

what i'd really like to see is a shirt on a face.

Liam - can you please tell me what is wrong with a face on a shirt? There are numerous face-shirts on threadless - a couple are actually printed.

didn't you already submit this but without hair? I liked it without hair - with hair the head looks too small.

too small??

You should do the hair bigger, it's too smal.

haha icmedia



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okay. so i commented on your last submission, and i see you took your critiques in mind in submitting a new one.

im glad to see this.

and its nice to see color change, thats kinda neat.

but eh...

the hair. you added hair.

the quality of the hair and the face is quite an obvious difference. it is blatant that you spent a lot of time developing the image of the face, and the hair looks hastily added...



right now, your design is just a face. are you sure you want this? its a pretty bold design, with one concept. thats alright, but if this is it, perfect it. lose the hair and keep your old submission, or keep the hair, but work on that some more.



you could maybe add more elements to your design. are you trying to communicate something here? or just have the image, because it looks rockin?



there is so much green right now that it reminds me of a previous winner:

http://threadless.com/product/104.html

it has almost the same concept, a woman looking with an intense glare... the colors are similar... but the previous winning design has many other things going on. the design is very intricate and detailed.



consider these things. you could work on this some more, or give it a little break and come back to it later, in the mean time you could show off your talents in another submission?

dont rush yourself. you have an obvious skill, but i can see that you dont give your full talent into the project when you are pushed. ease your stress, take your time, and really look over everything before you submit. critique yourself, get your friends/family/online friends to critique before you give it to the crowd and judges.



<3

p.s. nice job losing one color and replacing it with the t shirt color, thats a great technique i wish more people would catch on to.

i like the colors. looks kinda weird though. too huge face on too small head

theres no room for brains in the space given for the hair

Am I the only one who made the connection to Ashlee Simpson? You know, her song, "lala" and... eh.



Nice though.