trouble maker cats.my first submission hastn accepted they said it wa really good so i try it again

cute characters... I'd remove the text tho...

This is so cute, I love how the text looks. Very nice job!

I really like the design. The characters are super cute!
I agree with Santo, lose the text. It's unnecessary.

i think a centered placement would be better and i agree about the text.
cool characters. love the cats!

Pls critique Mr. Time

i think it needs to be bigger. i don't know how! but it's so cute that i want to see it better!

Cute
If you want to keep the text, try making it out of the blue string. Right now it just looks stuck on, and doesn't really add anything.

Love the design, but not the placement - I reckon they should be bigger and centre placement. Good work though, ooh, and I agree with garciagirl on the text - string :D

I like the design, but I would prefer a shirt color other than white. Also agree you could lose the text and maybe a different placement.

I'm not sure on the placement. The design is lovely, very cute and bright. The text doesn't seem quite right as it is, it becomes confused with the thread in the background. Perhaps you could make the thread into the words?

i want it now.

cute :D

Too Kewl!!!