hp pigeon?

no not at all. they are positive + symbols or elements, which I see you have also used in one of your chindogu designs. ;)

Not bad.

I like this very much. But that amount of white will be too much for printing. And i will be on your belly, not on your chest.

I would do it smaller an re-place it in a non usual side of the tee. Maybe bottom right.

confused pigeon?

slopez, you won't be on my belly OR my chest if i have anything to say about it. sorry if you had your hopes up.

Olisam, Liam got you didn't he?



Did Chindogu say "An HP girl?" when you submitted that design?



All these Threadless kids are so quick to judge. Don't let 'em get you down, Liam_81, it's a cool shirt.





And...please....can we all just stop saying shit like "I like the design but the placement is all wrong." and "I love the design but I would make it smaller/bigger." ?

JA!! sorry ICMEDIA I missed a "T".



Shootslinger: I think that´s why this is here. To put some constructive and respectful critics. It´s good to have some feedback about your work.

We need more plus-signs right now.

I think he looks drunk and I like it because it's refreshing after all the drunk monkeys. I'd buy it

looks like he got knocked in the head, and is dazed. make the +'s stars and it'd be hilarious, i'd buy that.

you can't get so worked up over the hp comments. the plus signs have been way overused here as of late. hewlett packard has done an excellent job of making that their company logo and forcing it into our visual vernacular, so now when most people see a plus sign, hp comes along with it. bummer for the plus sign, and anybody who uses it, because now it comes with that baggage, whether you want it or not.

come on soothslinger, you know what goes on around here. this is a criticism forum. the old "if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything" idiom doesn't hold water here. if you don't like it, bye.

yeah first thing i thought was HP.

He is positively drunk and selling HP products, and possibly a mathematician.

sorry guys, but I have no idea what this hp thing is... I have searched on the web and even the hewlett packard website and can't find anything similar to what you are going on about.



Thanks for the comments anyways.

i like this design...

sorry - i must be living under a rock of late too.. i have no idea about the HP thing either... then again im from australia so maybe they havent started that advertising campaign over here yet..



have to agree about the size, maybe too big, as the graphics centre is too low, making it sit more on the stomach instead of the chest area...



also if it was a girls tee - you have to consider the bust area is not quite as flat as a guys, so it might look a wee bit distorted! ;)



bottom left hand corner is what i would do (and i'd even leave it in this size if you put it there)

colours are cool for this design.. usually i'd opt against a poo brown colour tshirt.. but in this case it works



i'd buy it



X

thisisridiculous,



I have no problem with original criticism, it's the copy-&-paste kind that I find so pointless.



You are correct, though, and looking back now I see that I must have been grumpy or something on Friday. ; )

soothslinger, sometimes all that's wrong with a shirt design is placement or size. it'd be nice if people could use a more interesting way of getting their points across, especially if the previous 5 posts are saying the same thing, but that's all part of the game.

and grumpy? brother, you don't want to see me when i'm grumpy. (there'd be a lot of misspelled words and random letters from just pounding the keyboard. i'll try to control myself in the future)

HP Brand campaign: you + HP

http://www.hp.com/hpinfo/newsroom/hpads/you/



This shirt is more interesting and much better than the HP advertising campaign though

WACK! lame shirt.