Color Noir
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Mar 12 '09
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1.87 from 661 votes
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ArTrOcItY on Mar 12 '09 Let me guess, lack of comments=dramatic noir ending...
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I don't know... I feel like he should be holding a rubber chicken or something.
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ArTrOcItY on Mar 12 '09 Ok thanks but I feel that would ruin the whole concept...
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Rubber chicken? WTF?
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I love how he's in a trench coat. Not sketchy at all. Good idea though. I think you could have illustrated her disapproval a little better but it's chill. Good luck with this!
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FRICKINAWESOME on Mar 14 '09 Interesting idea on how the shirt color and the characters are interacting, but everything doesn't feel too cohesive yet. Maybe even have the woman on the ground or stepping backwards and a red drop from the paintbrush hits her toe and it disappears into the color of the tee or something. Nice idea here.
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ArTrOcItY on Mar 14 '09 Thank you everyone, I'm glad to see nobody else likes the idea of rubber chicken!:) Well in noir genre they always, at least to me, look kind of stiff so I didn't want to overdo it with there expressions and when I had this in critique, I had him splat little bit of paint on her and I got a comment he's splatting red semen on her, so go figure! Well, I think I'm going to do this one again or maybe even a series of designs like this but unfortunately it seems to me most people here are not really thrilled over this:)):
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the thing with film noir is you often can't see everything. This is almost too clear.
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ArTrOcItY on Mar 15 '09 In noir comics you can and if I done that, I bet people would be like I can't see anything on this shirt!
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I really like the idea with the shirt's coloration being a part of the design. The trench coat gives him a stalkerish feel but I get that it's noir. I gave this a good rating.
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I really liked this. I definitely got the noir comics feel.
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