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Submitted on:
Mar 10 '09
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2.33 out of 5
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landosamorm
I was playing with various punctuation marks and I liked the way I could get 7 unique marks with only six "dots".

Even unexplained, the design stands on its own. Click "PRINT + LABELS" button to see the different marks pointed out.
westicles
westicles on Mar 10 '09
Interesting.
brentendo
brentendo on Mar 10 '09
I'm a fan of your simple typographic work dude
adorablepancreas
adorablepancreas on Mar 10 '09
really clever idea. i like it.
Please check out my slogans if you get the chance.
inechi
inechi on Mar 10 '09
i find it more interesting with the labels!
steakboy
steakboy on Mar 10 '09
"...playing with various punctuation marks..."

word

i think this design, with this color selection, would look even better on a darker background. maybe not black, but a good charcoal grey perhaps.

that apart, i like it a lot.
wutwazthat4
wutwazthat4 on Mar 10 '09
you say there is 7 marks but you only have 6 labeled on there..
Sanders850
Sanders850 on Mar 10 '09
I agree on a darker gray.
Sanders850
Sanders850 on Mar 10 '09
or a royal blue like the "print + label" background shirt is.
evan3
   evan3 on Mar 10 '09
very neat!
n33dxaxbrain
n33dxaxbrain on Mar 10 '09
love the idea!
i agree, a less bland background color [but not too much to detract from the great punctuation colors]
and i like it better with the labels [in that font&arrangement]
awesome design :)
duckiethemonkey8
duckiethemonkey8 on Mar 10 '09
@ wutwazthat4:
there are 2 periods
ph03n1x
ph03n1x on Mar 10 '09
i second everyone on the need for a darker shirt color.
i also second everyone who said that this is very clever.

finally, as a writer, artist, colorist, and t-shirt lover, this design TOTALLY suits me! 5$

now if only you put them on a musical staff.... (no! j/k! don't do that! haha)
AdderXYU
AdderXYU on Mar 10 '09
subtle, but intriguing
jplove
jplove on Mar 10 '09
Cool! I agree with said above!
landosamorm
landosamorm on Mar 10 '09
Er, yeah. I guess there are 6 UNIQUE marks and 7 total marks (two periods).

Thanks for the comments!
bygrinstow
bygrinstow on Mar 10 '09
Lovely.

If it weren't on a darker shirt, I'd like nice sharp, black, drop-shadowy things to set them off...
Pixelweltenbummler
Pixelweltenbummler on Mar 10 '09
oh this is cool..... and interesting :)

please help me ^^:
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drmtama2
drmtama2 on Mar 10 '09
i am a 4th grade writing teacher.....

this is awesome!!!!

i wish you could have incorporated the question mark ? and the exclamation mark ! as well

:)
shy bo1
shy bo1 on Mar 10 '09
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badbasilisk
   badbasilisk on Mar 11 '09
coolness
coretesu
coretesu on Mar 11 '09
Sorry i don't like it, sometimes simple its not smart.
NazdaqIndex
NazdaqIndex on Mar 11 '09
!?
olie!
   olie! on Mar 11 '09
I think it's a really clever idea, the only thing I think holding it back is how all the dots are different colors for no apparent reason. I think it'd be a lot stronger if all the dots were just one color, probably black, which would be super easy to change and make the symbols easier to read (for me at least). Nice job nonetheless :)
pyko
pyko on Mar 11 '09
awesome i love it!!!
the design so simple and clean and yet so clever :D
bygrinstow
bygrinstow on Mar 11 '09
Actually, I do think the colors relate, but maybe that could be pushed further?

The semi-colon is two greens, the colon is red and orange, the quotation mark is the two darkest cool colors... it's the ellipsis that's most disjointed colorwise. ...And I love ellipsis. I waste the most pixels making ellipses....
liptrip
liptrip on Mar 11 '09
love!
keep it simple
Gl1tt3r
Gl1tt3r on Mar 11 '09
On black or a dark color please! I want this shirt.
ART AT WORK
ART AT WORK on Mar 11 '09
love this man

hey can you score my design also and comment plz
carolann12582
carolann12582 on Mar 12 '09
so clean and interesting
jpjeffries
jpjeffries on Mar 12 '09
I agree with others; I'm distracted by the colors. Maybe a tie die shirt with black or blue dots and commas etc?
LINK2DPAST
LINK2DPAST on Mar 12 '09
I'm only countin' 6 distinct punctuation marks, but that such a minor presentation detail I don't care. This is cool!
usemefriendly
usemefriendly on Mar 12 '09
very clever! i do like this! if i wore this, i would feel smart, like i could write anything with the right punctuation!
5$
taliamarin1994
taliamarin1994 on Mar 12 '09
5$

Finally, another shirt from you :)

dannodepf
dannodepf on Mar 13 '09
simple, yet striking. i wish people were more appreciative of the simple things in life around here sometimes...
expresslapassion
expresslapassion on Mar 13 '09
Different background color, but other than that I like it

Tuckr
Tuckr on Mar 14 '09
really clever, nice design :)
rezuan
rezuan on Mar 14 '09
brilliant ....
jaywalkergraphics
jaywalkergraphics on Mar 14 '09
Dude, that is FREAKING CLEVER.
leileilani
leileilani on Mar 16 '09
I'd definitely buy this on a darker grey!
AllSeeingAnvilArts
AllSeeingAnvilArts on Mar 16 '09
Cool! Darker colour for sure. Don't let this be your last typography shirt either!!

Would love some feedback here!
phones
phones on Mar 17 '09
$5
9 days later
jplove
jplove on Mar 27 '09
you should tweak and resub this
freshiebeth
freshiebeth on Mar 28 '09
I think it's cute!
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