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Interesting.
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I'm a fan of your simple typographic work dude
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really clever idea. i like it.
Please check out my slogans if you get the chance. |
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i find it more interesting with the labels!
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"...playing with various punctuation marks..."
word i think this design, with this color selection, would look even better on a darker background. maybe not black, but a good charcoal grey perhaps. that apart, i like it a lot. |
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you say there is 7 marks but you only have 6 labeled on there..
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I agree on a darker gray.
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or a royal blue like the "print + label" background shirt is.
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evan3 on Mar 10 '09 very neat!
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love the idea!
i agree, a less bland background color [but not too much to detract from the great punctuation colors] and i like it better with the labels [in that font&arrangement] awesome design :) |
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@ wutwazthat4:
there are 2 periods |
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i second everyone on the need for a darker shirt color.
i also second everyone who said that this is very clever. finally, as a writer, artist, colorist, and t-shirt lover, this design TOTALLY suits me! 5$ now if only you put them on a musical staff.... (no! j/k! don't do that! haha) |
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subtle, but intriguing
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Cool! I agree with said above!
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Er, yeah. I guess there are 6 UNIQUE marks and 7 total marks (two periods).
Thanks for the comments! |
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Lovely.
If it weren't on a darker shirt, I'd like nice sharp, black, drop-shadowy things to set them off... |
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oh this is cool..... and interesting :)
please help me ^^: http://www.threadless.com/profile/911514/Pixelweltenbummler/critiques |
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i am a 4th grade writing teacher.....
this is awesome!!!! i wish you could have incorporated the question mark ? and the exclamation mark ! as well :) |
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badbasilisk on Mar 11 '09 coolness
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Sorry i don't like it, sometimes simple its not smart.
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olie! on Mar 11 '09 I think it's a really clever idea, the only thing I think holding it back is how all the dots are different colors for no apparent reason. I think it'd be a lot stronger if all the dots were just one color, probably black, which would be super easy to change and make the symbols easier to read (for me at least). Nice job nonetheless :)
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awesome i love it!!!
the design so simple and clean and yet so clever :D |
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Actually, I do think the colors relate, but maybe that could be pushed further?
The semi-colon is two greens, the colon is red and orange, the quotation mark is the two darkest cool colors... it's the ellipsis that's most disjointed colorwise. ...And I love ellipsis. I waste the most pixels making ellipses.... |
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love!
keep it simple |
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On black or a dark color please! I want this shirt.
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love this man
hey can you score my design also and comment plz |
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so clean and interesting
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I agree with others; I'm distracted by the colors. Maybe a tie die shirt with black or blue dots and commas etc?
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I'm only countin' 6 distinct punctuation marks, but that such a minor presentation detail I don't care. This is cool!
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very clever! i do like this! if i wore this, i would feel smart, like i could write anything with the right punctuation!
5$ |
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5$
Finally, another shirt from you :) |
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simple, yet striking. i wish people were more appreciative of the simple things in life around here sometimes...
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Different background color, but other than that I like it
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really clever, nice design :)
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brilliant ....
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Dude, that is FREAKING CLEVER.
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I'd definitely buy this on a darker grey!
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Cool! Darker colour for sure. Don't let this be your last typography shirt either!!
Would love some feedback here! |
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$5
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you should tweak and resub this
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I think it's cute!
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Even unexplained, the design stands on its own. Click "PRINT + LABELS" button to see the different marks pointed out.