About the design
Submitted by landosamorm
on March 7, 2009
I was playing with various punctuation marks and I liked the way I could get 7 unique marks with only six "dots".
Even unexplained, the design stands on its own. Click "PRINT + LABELS" button to see the different marks pointed out.
landosamorm
I was playing with various punctuation marks and I liked the way I could get 7 unique marks with only six "dots".
Even unexplained, the design stands on its own. Click "PRINT + LABELS" button to see the different marks pointed out.
westicles
Interesting.
brentendo
I'm a fan of your simple typographic work dude
adorablepancreas
really clever idea. i like it.
Please check out my slogans if you get the chance.
inechi
i find it more interesting with the labels!
steakboy
"...playing with various punctuation marks..."
word
i think this design, with this color selection, would look even better on a darker background. maybe not black, but a good charcoal grey perhaps.
that apart, i like it a lot.
wutwazthat4
you say there is 7 marks but you only have 6 labeled on there..
Sanders850
I agree on a darker gray.
Sanders850
or a royal blue like the "print + label" background shirt is.
evan3
very neat!
n33dxaxbrain
love the idea!
i agree, a less bland background color [but not too much to detract from the great punctuation colors]
and i like it better with the labels [in that font&arrangement]
awesome design :)
duckiethemonkey8
@ wutwazthat4:
there are 2 periods
ph03n1x
i second everyone on the need for a darker shirt color.
i also second everyone who said that this is very clever.
finally, as a writer, artist, colorist, and t-shirt lover, this design TOTALLY suits me! 5$
now if only you put them on a musical staff.... (no! j/k! don't do that! haha)
AdderXYU
subtle, but intriguing
jplove
Cool! I agree with said above!
landosamorm
Er, yeah. I guess there are 6 UNIQUE marks and 7 total marks (two periods).
Thanks for the comments!
bygrinstow
Lovely.
If it weren't on a darker shirt, I'd like nice sharp, black, drop-shadowy things to set them off...
Pixelweltenbummler
oh this is cool..... and interesting :)
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drmtama2
i am a 4th grade writing teacher.....
this is awesome!!!!
i wish you could have incorporated the question mark ? and the exclamation mark ! as well
:)
shy bo1
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badbasilisk
coolness
coretesu
Sorry i don't like it, sometimes simple its not smart.
NazdaqIndex
!?
olie!
I think it's a really clever idea, the only thing I think holding it back is how all the dots are different colors for no apparent reason. I think it'd be a lot stronger if all the dots were just one color, probably black, which would be super easy to change and make the symbols easier to read (for me at least). Nice job nonetheless :)
pyko
awesome i love it!!!
the design so simple and clean and yet so clever :D
bygrinstow
Actually, I do think the colors relate, but maybe that could be pushed further?
The semi-colon is two greens, the colon is red and orange, the quotation mark is the two darkest cool colors... it's the ellipsis that's most disjointed colorwise. ...And I love ellipsis. I waste the most pixels making ellipses....
liptrip
love!
keep it simple
Gl1tt3r
On black or a dark color please! I want this shirt.
ART AT WORK
love this man
hey can you score my design also and comment plz
carolann12582
so clean and interesting
jpjeffries
I agree with others; I'm distracted by the colors. Maybe a tie die shirt with black or blue dots and commas etc?
LINK2DPAST
I'm only countin' 6 distinct punctuation marks, but that such a minor presentation detail I don't care. This is cool!
usemefriendly
very clever! i do like this! if i wore this, i would feel smart, like i could write anything with the right punctuation!
5$
taliamarin1994
5$
Finally, another shirt from you :)
dannodepf
simple, yet striking. i wish people were more appreciative of the simple things in life around here sometimes...
expresslapassion
Different background color, but other than that I like it
Tuckr
really clever, nice design :)
rezuan
brilliant ....
jaywalkergraphics
Dude, that is FREAKING CLEVER.
leileilani
I'd definitely buy this on a darker grey!
AllSeeingAnvilArts
Cool! Darker colour for sure. Don't let this be your last typography shirt either!!
Would love some feedback here!
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$5
jplove
you should tweak and resub this
freshiebeth
I think it's cute!
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