Kill the text n' a little smaller

yes; the image pretty much says it all.

I like the text but i would rather it say "I heart money". Either that or make the dollar signs stand out more.

Good concept.

what do you mean good concept, this is obviously shit. C'mon now, we've seen the "s form the heart" a billion times, how bout you be a little more original, this is shit. What dumb and boring typography... 0

Kill the text.

lose the text and use bold warm colours...nething but those ones.

agree with c.c. "s"s forming a heart isn't very original, those don't really look like dollar signs, and that font at the bottom is pretty bland.

AWFUL

TOO LOVEY

This reminds of one of those corny shirts that girls buy at KMart the ones that say something like "Oh, sorry...YOU WERE CUTER FROM FAR AWAY!" and then they think they're funny and rebellious when their are really stupid looking and ugly.

Note: If you're going to criticize, be constructive and respectful about it. You dicks, grow a heart. It looks decent, not the best I've seen. The text at the bottom does fir remarkably well.

note:if you're goint to criticize, be constructive and respectful about it.
implying that someone is a heartless dick is neither.

koramak66, if my dick grows a heart you will be the first to know about it.

intead of "I love money" what about, "i am a prisoner of my heart" ?

The design is rather bland. It's not necessarily because hearts have been shaped by letter S one too many times. The 'wrong typeface' comment also applies to the two S's that are used to shape the heart. (Consider using only one S.) Overall, I think this is one of those cases where simplicity works against the design.

take out the text. its overkill. and the design is weak. conceptually its ok. just do it better

i want to see a homeless person wearing this.

they'd also be wearing the 'high roller' shirt. at the same time, just underneath.

stussy sista?

i still haven't figured out why people think they're coming up with clever ideas incorporating text and a logo-ish image. It's boring, expected, and not cool.