I'm not sure if you meant it this way, but i like how the lion looks like a paper-sack puppet! Also, I think it would look a lot cuter if you made the ribcage hand-drawn as well. It doesn't really fit with the rest of the shirt, which is adorable! I would definitely buy!
this is terribly rough around the edges. if you want it to look like a paper bag, keep it the way it scans in. the way you have it now looks like live-trace gone awry.
and like dude above me said, the ribcage really doesn't 'belong' to the same world as this lion guy.
if you were to do this again, i'd suggest drawing directly on the paper bag to pull both images together. even then though i don't know if it's a cohesive enough idea to be rated highly here, but it would make an interesting puppet.
I actually really like the way it is "terribly rough around the edges" makes it unique and interesting to look at. Beautiful colours! I agree with the rib cage though :( not really needed in my opinion - but hey, you're the artist :)
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