We need to aware of what we are driving and how we are consuming energy in our daily lives so we can open our doors to a greener life. We all hold the key to a greener life we just have to find it.

comments are appreciated. :)

Have you had this critiqued yet?

no.

I would probably get it critiqued first...then sub it. You have a nice start of and idea, but I don't think it's ready just yet. JMO.

can you take it out thought? and still be able to put it back in?

Hmm...I think so. I've seen some peoples designs re-done in the critique area after they actually sub'd them in the real voting section. Not sure how ya do it... since I haven't sub'd anything yet. Just try to get this one out of the voting section right away...and get it into critique. Good luck.

thanks!

YA NOT READY TO SUB. LOOKS BAD BUT HAS POTENTIAL

Um, I like the design a lot however the blue door looks like it was only put through the "photocoppy" filter in photoshop.

no the door is hand drawn and just scanned.

ps. all along the key there are cars leading up to the city, you cant see it since on here it is to small. and the wood grains symbolize smoke going into the air.

Yeah not ready to submit yet, although it has good potential to be a nice design.

it is a good idea, but i wish you would have put it in the critique so that you could get some good feed back.

you should take these good meant advices to heart and not understand as an attack of your person or your work.



i think the idea is very good. you have talent, but there are two things you should improve when you resubmit or send in a new design.



1. make sure that everybody could see your thing with all the details and fine, little intents. they got lost in this size. and this is quite pitty, because it put down your score only because of this small view.



2. the whole artwork seems unfinished. more than a demo, than a ready work. for example the green behind the door. you could draw some trees, flowers or whatever there. and draw it like they were coming, reaching, stepping out of the door. it is only a suggestion.



or make the industry on the door more dirty, aggressive. it is too soft, that i could invoke this effect "this is the wrong way for us."



hope this will help you.

yeah looks good but critique first