its like some potaoes and they are like pretty scared ya know...........

Great but could use either bigger images or a background

i considered a background but i wasnt sure what to use so i left it out , thanks for the comment :)

Did ya get this critiqued first??

hmm not that i know of

The idea's ok, but it looks "a bit" unfinished...

Rema 999's stupid slogans!

I actually kind of like this one for its goofy, unfinished look...

see this guy knows what its all about lolololol

its quite an original idea, but it looks liek you could add soemthing in to make the shirt look more "finished". But i love it anyways!

thanks for the feedback switchfoot :D

lolz

yeah...it seems like it needs a bit more work...nice idea though...pretty funny.

He's not very monster-ish.

thats because your not a potato so of course he doesnt seem monsterish :P

I think your style has potential

thanks sgt.dobad x

i like this. you should have the background be a counter or somthing....?

oh i don't know Frawesome is pretty potato-y

bwahaha i guess he is

liptrip - yeah guess that woulda been gd

i like the style of the grrrr

It needs something, but I like the idea.

the style is fine, I think these day people are comfortable with a rougher style and it works perfectly for this design, don't change that!... maybe potatoes could be bigger or with a sprout or two, to avoid looking like peanuts. Concept is golden:)

thanks for the advice and comments people!

Maybe sling it around in critiques next time? You'd get feedback without having to commit to a finished submission. Your style is so clean and cutesy that it would do well on its own, the concept is charming, and the simplicity is refreshing, but it could do with a bit of polish.

In my mind the masher and the "grrr" are perfect, but the potatoes are lacking something.

Best of luck!

Thanks for the feedback oddreaper , i sure love comments :D

I also like the 'unfinished' look of this design. It reminds me of Napoleon Dynamite's drawings, if you know what I'm talking about.

napoleon dynamite drawings??? googles bwhahah major lols :D

no one will buy this... no offence

PRINT!