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Monster Mash

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by randyotter3000   
its like some potaoes and they are like pretty scared ya know...........
Ticodude
Ticodude on Feb 23 '09
Great but could use either bigger images or a background
randyotter3000
   randyotter3000 on Feb 23 '09
i considered a background but i wasnt sure what to use so i left it out , thanks for the comment :)
wigglefish
wigglefish on Feb 23 '09
Did ya get this critiqued first??
randyotter3000
   randyotter3000 on Feb 23 '09
hmm not that i know of
Rema999
Rema999 on Feb 24 '09
The idea's ok, but it looks "a bit" unfinished...



Rema 999's stupid slogans!
Wee_Little_Faerie
Wee_Little_Faerie on Feb 24 '09
I actually kind of like this one for its goofy, unfinished look...
randyotter3000
   randyotter3000 on Feb 24 '09
see this guy knows what its all about lolololol
switchfoot341
switchfoot341 on Feb 24 '09
its quite an original idea, but it looks liek you could add soemthing in to make the shirt look more "finished". But i love it anyways!
randyotter3000
   randyotter3000 on Feb 24 '09
thanks for the feedback switchfoot :D
frums23
frums23 on Feb 24 '09
lolz
boostr29
   boostr29 on Feb 24 '09
yeah...it seems like it needs a bit more work...nice idea though...pretty funny.
FRICKINAWESOME
   FRICKINAWESOME on Feb 25 '09
He's not very monster-ish.
randyotter3000
   randyotter3000 on Feb 25 '09
thats because your not a potato so of course he doesnt seem monsterish :P
Sgt.Dobad
Sgt.Dobad on Feb 25 '09
I think your style has potential
randyotter3000
   randyotter3000 on Feb 25 '09
thanks sgt.dobad x
liptrip
liptrip on Feb 25 '09
i like this. you should have the background be a counter or somthing....?
phones
phones on Feb 25 '09
oh i don't know Frawesome is pretty potato-y
randyotter3000
   randyotter3000 on Feb 25 '09
bwahaha i guess he is



liptrip - yeah guess that woulda been gd

Salvatron
Salvatron on Feb 26 '09
i like the style of the grrrr
Tublet
Tublet on Feb 27 '09
It needs something, but I like the idea.
Deer Girl
Deer Girl on Feb 27 '09
the style is fine, I think these day people are comfortable with a rougher style and it works perfectly for this design, don't change that!... maybe potatoes could be bigger or with a sprout or two, to avoid looking like peanuts. Concept is golden:)
randyotter3000
   randyotter3000 on Feb 27 '09
thanks for the advice and comments people!
oddreaper
oddreaper on Feb 27 '09
Maybe sling it around in critiques next time? You'd get feedback without having to commit to a finished submission. Your style is so clean and cutesy that it would do well on its own, the concept is charming, and the simplicity is refreshing, but it could do with a bit of polish.



In my mind the masher and the "grrr" are perfect, but the potatoes are lacking something.



Best of luck!
randyotter3000
   randyotter3000 on Feb 28 '09
Thanks for the feedback oddreaper , i sure love comments :D
SILHOUETTEshadow
SILHOUETTEshadow on Mar 01 '09
I also like the 'unfinished' look of this design. It reminds me of Napoleon Dynamite's drawings, if you know what I'm talking about.
randyotter3000
   randyotter3000 on Mar 01 '09
napoleon dynamite drawings??? *googles* bwhahah major lols :D
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california_love
california_love on Mar 31 '09
no one will buy this... no offence
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   Torakamikaze on Aug 26 '11
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