this is really depressing. i don't believe there is a "z" in "please". the blood on the arm looks like it's spattered rather than dripping. this would look much more gruesome if you make the blood look like it's dripping or squirting from the wrist...right now it appears that someone splattered blood on this guys arm wich isn't very nice.

its too negativ for a tshirt..

The hand is poorly drawn, the blood splatters don't make sense, and I have that font. I think it's rather standard. Please don't minimize the immense effect of suicide upon others by putting something like this on a shirt. It isn't funny.

is there any need?

this is shit. worst shirt I have seen.

Why don't you stop bringing your lifes into this. It's not about whether you like it, its if the design and message is good. Stick to the subject, fuckers.

get some help.



im serious.



get on the phone, its in the phonebook.



you can obviously use the internet, go find help.



do it.

okay then...



the design and message in this shirt is shit. This is up there on the same level as the wife beater shirt.



Its fucking disgusting.

I hate it too. I don't find sucide very funny at all, and what about the people who'll see some kid wearing it who have experienced something like this themselves. just wrong

i personally wouldn't have spelled please with a z and aside from that the shirt is kind of graphic

this shirt is so bad, I want to kill myself

Dude, that's not cool.

Help him please!

there are way too many things wrong with this shirt.

I think its quite good. Really emotional but cool. A little sick like but i think its got promise!

not good

Help you plz? by doing what exactly, burning your Slipknot albums?, grow up for all our sakes.

is your cd changer full of singers who are mad at their dads?

design wise; blood doesn't splatter out of you, no reason to spell please like that except for the urgency of the situation which would pretty much warrant only the word 'help', the end of the last letter should trail off as a fainting persons script would, it would be more interesting if the hand appeared to belong to the wearer of the shirt, the preferred manner of slashing ones wrist is lengthwise as opposed to across.

that being said, this is a stupid idea. i'm not easily offended, but suicide stuff just isn't cool. clearly you have never lost someone to that kind of despair. if you wore that around me and my friends, that'd be real blood on your shirt; yours. no joke.

eeek....

design should not be limited, I knew, suicide is not kidding one, even i made it i also afraid the bad reflection.......anyway, thank you any commends...

Ethen, what you just said didn't make any sense... and you speeled "plz" wrong

i like it

................

this is nothing to be toyed around with.

this submission gets a 0.

if you wanted this to be serious, make it a better, more detailed, more professional looking piece of art that people have to *****really look into and understand****.





[some dinky little arm you drew + randomly placed blood splatters + cheap font + writing PLZ instead of actually spelling the word out]

shows that you are farrrrrrrrr too immature for this.

you thought that you could get people's attention because of this concept.

you thought that this idea would be able to draw the public in, some of us might be able to relate to it, and you thought that it would be successful.

instead, you took this **very serious** concept, and gave it a really cheap underdeveloped amateur display.

zoloft

hey i thought about this design while i was ordering the "follwers in the attic" shirt and they are very similar

they both deal with suicide, i mean no that i think about why wasnt follwers in the attic criticized like this one?

i think you should really lose the text....

i like it because it evokes a reaction. you can't ignorethis shirt. i think it's hilarious how ppl r so pissed off by it. that alone merits, "job well done!"

i'm not sure this is something i'd wear. it doesn't fit my personality. but i do have a some friends that would happily sport this design, should it ever make its debut .