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I've got the runs, forest, runs!
Yup, ditch the halftones and thisi s a winner of the number one variety talking about number two! |
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I'd suggest using a colour other than green on the rival team's uniform. You have enough colours left over to be able to add another one. At present they really look like the same team.
I'd say it's probably a bit too similar to Flying Mouse's Champion Runner. I do think his is a little more effective as it shows the motivation of the other runners being to win as well as the winner's motivation for the toilet. |
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I totally like the drawing and colours etc, but the joke unfortunately doesn't strike me as very funny..
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its a good illo. looks better on the lighter green. its interesting how the eyes of the white team are evil looking, i enjoy subtle details like that :P
p.s. if ur interested check out my first sub. |
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