i don't get why you used the grey box?

OMG you are like so deep. Grow up.

rocknrolty, i'm glad to see someone else on this site who is honest, and not filling people's heads with false ideas of sucess

ive been shattered by crap

i guess i apologize for this post. sincerely. not cool. check out my other designs, but steer clear of this one. sorry guys.

you are so cool. i think my last post was probally the meanest thing ive ever said and you didnt have a cry. i did check out your other submissions and they are pretty good. obviously you were a little sad and probally very tired when you submitted this. you are the first person who has openly said that their design was crap - that i remember - and for that you hav my respect

I don't mind the bottles but the box is not useful at all. Besides the bottles can be shifted downwards ans given some shades of grey. Sorry if i talk a lot...

its good just lose the gray box

thanks for the feedback guys. imonkey, i appreciate both your first and second posts, the first for opening my eyes to the design, and the second for the props to my honesty. It's great for me as an artist to take criticism in any form, and see the truth in it. Thanks again. AS for the gray box, my monitor is very dark, so i must've picked a dark grey, as opposed to a true black. sorry bout that.

wow speaks to me,maybe because im so 'imature' too, don't listen it is class

wow... that's stupid

i like it. i'd like it a lot more w/out the box. looks like maybe a case of CMYK (0,0,0,100) and RGB clashing...

One could buy a shirt like that at Hot Topic. Shouldn't one be above all that?

OMG EMO

the bottles look very nice, get rid of the lame typography.

lose teh grey box it = raw as.

also make the "ess" show up better, like better placement

lose the words