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New and improved version.
lotus
lotus on May 05 '04
i love it
slopez
slopez on May 05 '04
kinda big, but I really like it. (5)
contrariwise
   contrariwise on May 05 '04
Great, but if you're going to have the perspective lines in there, you might as well make the perspective of the Xs match them.
one8_2zeros
one8_2zeros on May 05 '04
it's still really nice.



clean and smooth but not sterile or boring. hard thing to accomplish. congrats..
rocknrollty
rocknrollty on May 05 '04
I dig. Very cool.
solbro
solbro on May 06 '04
contrariwise was right, the x's need to be in perspective, otherwise it's great.
jbyron
   jbyron on May 06 '04
This angle/perspective thing is killin' me.

But rest assured, I have fixed the problem - however, I can't bring myself to post this again so just use your imagination.

Thanks for all the comments - the original version scored pretty well, so who knows - maybe this attempt was in vain.

Enjoy. - j
thor3000
thor3000 on May 06 '04
nice idea.
ttka
ttka on May 06 '04
much better... but i agree with the X persp.... and maybe text could be a little bigger ( more readable)
Maître Gonzo
Maître Gonzo on May 06 '04
I liked the first version. It was simple, clear. This one is also good!
eskimokiss
   eskimokiss on May 06 '04
The simplicity of the previous version appealed more to me. Don't like the perspective thing.. takes away from the "quirkyness" of the design if you know what I mean.
gigrog
gigrog on May 06 '04
Give the blues lines more contrast.
deadpuppy
deadpuppy on May 06 '04
i liked the old version better. think it was better when the swing set was more centered and the marks of to one side. the lines destract from the image a bit. but i still like it enough to buy it. i can only give it a 4 though
adamjohnson
adamjohnson on May 06 '04
i really love this design. Mayber if it were a little smaller it would be better. i would definitely buy it!
Ava Adore
Ava Adore on May 07 '04
cool idea.

nice tee.

DiaScribe
DiaScribe on May 07 '04
Winner
sc3
sc3 on May 07 '04
hehe cool idea..
thingsmatter
thingsmatter on May 07 '04
This is awesome. Thank god.
aixa
aixa on May 08 '04
that's an inteligent imagine
Mantis25
Mantis25 on May 08 '04
Nice shirt - agree about the x's... maybe a little lower placemet - very cool.
sounDune
sounDune on May 08 '04
good deal
GorgeousRy
GorgeousRy on May 09 '04
incredible, but you already know that! keep it up. (I think we have a winner)
timothypedersen
timothypedersen on May 09 '04
great concept, fix the type placement if you're planning on a revision
timothypedersen
timothypedersen on May 09 '04
"fix" meaning move the text out of the design maybe...



it'd be cool if you made a legend like this:



http://www.threadless.com/product/47.html
vwoop
   vwoop on May 10 '04
huge improvement.



x buy and 5
Vinyl Jones
Vinyl Jones on May 10 '04
very nice. you're almost there...... iwish we could see the next revision.
jbyron
   jbyron on May 10 '04
There really isn't a "next revision."

All I did since posting this version is make the lower X a little less skewed so it's in perspective with the lines.

It's a minimal change and not very noticable. Thanks for all the kind words everybody.
thewebguy
thewebguy on May 11 '04
this is the single best shirt i have seen in months.



i really hope it gets printed.
Hanta!
Hanta! on May 11 '04
never seen the first one but this look pretty rad
hi_may
hi_may on May 12 '04
I'd buy this ish.
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Clit Ninja
Clit Ninja on Jun 14 '04
I must have it. Be with me.
Solaceinaddiction
Solaceinaddiction on Jun 14 '04
Of all the shirts on the website, with the exception of shadow bunny, this is the one I'm most desperate to buy. I'm pretty new to this website, does this shirt stand a chance at getting printed? I sure as hell hope so.
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lleathall
lleathall on Jun 18 '04
Yes, this one and "Racoons" are a must.
29 days later
mifecta
mifecta on Jul 17 '04
awesome. I would buy this.
5 days later
SSupermatt
SSupermatt on Jul 23 '04
yes very good

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ryanvandehey
ryanvandehey on Aug 02 '04
I like both versions of this. I would buy either one, and it would probably become my new favorite shirt. After "Burn", of course.
68 days later
imaguy2
imaguy2 on Oct 09 '04
ahhaah...i like the phunnies
146 days later
johannanana
johannanana on Mar 05 '05
Love it so much. Maybe the three lines on the farthest left shortened a bit?
274 days later
justgiv'r
justgiv'r on Dec 05 '05
WICKED PRINT

lauren ohh
lauren ohh on Dec 06 '05
amazing.

some how i kind of "connect" with this shirt.

memories :]



i would soo buy this.

258 days later
weee
weee on Aug 22 '06
yeah ... great... i would buy it toooooo :)
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