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Unraveled Metallic Girl

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Feb 05 '09
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by aradock_aden
Cmyk Illustrator vector art
Trebligom
Trebligom on Feb 05 '09
it's a cool design but I would try to make it incorporate more into a t-shirt. it looks too rectangular, I don't think many people would like it because of that. maybe try to make the edges flow better...? other than that it's pretty awesome
flockstudios
flockstudios on Feb 05 '09
Nice illustrator work on the gradients, agreed with the making it somehow become a t- design versus just a cool design . . . We gotta integrate to the medium !
Lothran
Lothran on Feb 05 '09
great image, but like the other two, i'd like to see it relate to the shirt better. maybe on a black t-shirt with thte pink fading into it?
Bio-bot 9000
Bio-bot 9000 on Feb 06 '09
the two dots at the top look sort of like nipples, based on the placement.
Soulsick
Soulsick on Feb 06 '09
retro ...got nu rave!
nenmusicas
nenmusicas on Feb 06 '09
Nice! IŽd like it as a poster!! Really cool.



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Delicate Kitten
Delicate Kitten on Feb 06 '09
amazing design
Braniel
Braniel on Feb 06 '09
Just take out the back rectangle and put it on a maroon shirt and your set pal
cookingwithcrayons
cookingwithcrayons on Feb 06 '09
Say NO to framing...hardly ever looks nice on a Tee....cool design overall tho!
DesThrashX
DesThrashX on Feb 07 '09
So eighties!!!!! nice
evan3
   evan3 on Feb 08 '09
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dont like the rectangle

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Lamp_Man6
Lamp_Man6 on Feb 08 '09
retro really good.
Lamp_Man6
Lamp_Man6 on Feb 08 '09
retro really good.
ghost of sophia
ghost of sophia on Feb 09 '09
I agree I would feel very 80s wearing this so I automatically am a fan - maybe try and make the cool background work with the shirt a little better so it isn't as boxy though.
iforgot
iforgot on Feb 10 '09
I spy accidental nipples.
Leukos
Leukos on Feb 10 '09
this would make a better screen saver than a shirt
Basse17
Basse17 on Feb 10 '09
The concept is cool but you should try to remove that rectangle.
joh03816
joh03816 on Feb 11 '09
seems like a poster on a shirt, commit more to the shirt or stick it on a poster : ), cool design
mellimello
mellimello on Feb 12 '09
ya, really like the gradients but it's not really made for a t-shirt it seems. nice tho.
mellimello
mellimello on Feb 12 '09
who said 'nipples'...
ArikaGranger
ArikaGranger on Feb 12 '09
take off the rectangle and then woohoo!
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