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the great bullet train robbery.

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Jan 15 '09
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EricDiaz
EricDiaz on Jan 15 '09
nice!! Maybe try it with 'the' right above 'bullet', either way though a great resub.
TheInfamousBaka
TheInfamousBaka on Jan 15 '09
Very awesome. Absolutely love the perspective, it's spot on.
phillydesigner
   phillydesigner on Jan 15 '09
nice!
the_jcw
the_jcw on Jan 15 '09
cool work
SteveOramA
SteveOramA on Jan 15 '09
ahaha cool idea.
ratkiss
   ratkiss on Jan 15 '09
Great!
Papaprime
   Papaprime on Jan 15 '09
Thanks for the comments!
kooky love
   kooky love on Jan 15 '09
GREAT $5
Krakaboom
   Krakaboom on Jan 16 '09
That looks really, really smart on the shirt!
Ellogoods
Ellogoods on Jan 16 '09
great redo- a real improvement!
Bio-bot 9000
Bio-bot 9000 on Jan 17 '09
cool!!
FRICKINAWESOME
   FRICKINAWESOME on Jan 17 '09
Love the idea, but the cowboys and bullet train kinda smoosh together with all that black focused there, and the cow skull in the current placement kind of distracts from the other elements. I really like this idea, so I'd give it another resub with maybe having the cowboys some different crazy contrasting colors? Nice one man!
snow day.
snow day. on Jan 17 '09
sweet
turbolucy
turbolucy on Jan 17 '09
what FA said and i'd buy it!
Papaprime
   Papaprime on Jan 17 '09
Thanks for the critique. You should cruise the critique blogs a lil' more often FA, could have used ya!



Thanks for all the comments!
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Cici
Cici on Jan 19 '09
It is a big improvement

C Kid
   C Kid on Jan 21 '09
Soooo much better! 5.
Papaprime
   Papaprime on Jan 21 '09
Thanks, I've tried a couple times to redo a design to see if I've improved, this is the first one I think worked better than the first.
sheraprincessofpower
sheraprincessofpower on Jan 21 '09
I like the colors and style. Very Urban Offiters!
Papaprime
   Papaprime on Jan 21 '09
While I'm not a fan of Urban Outfitters, I'll never turn away a compliment! Thanks' She-Ra!
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