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by dversdzn
"…create and manipulate text in a way that it becomes the design, rather than just being a part of it!"



That was my goal with this, my first submission to Threadless. I tried to keep things a bit simple, no overly complicated details or production processes,just a simple sand colored shirt and a one color design.



The copy reads "Never bite the hand that feeds you."
crazyerica2024
crazyerica2024 on Jan 12 '09
I like the design but I think it's a little too hard to read. I didn't get it until I read it in your comment.
simply..beautiful
simply..beautiful on Jan 12 '09
I got it and I like it!
lilmichief78
lilmichief78 on Jan 12 '09
the thumb doesnt look like a "n" but i love it anway!! 5!!
KaeKae
KaeKae on Jan 12 '09
very cool!
castlexkid
castlexkid on Jan 12 '09
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tishe11
tishe11 on Jan 12 '09
it's hard to read, but since I know the saying I could see what it says.
Maltzmania
Maltzmania on Jan 12 '09
NOT PENNIES BOAT
Maltzmania
Maltzmania on Jan 12 '09
*PENNYS



shit.
whats.the.haps.shaps
whats.the.haps.shaps on Jan 12 '09
^lol!
yulyul
yulyul on Jan 13 '09
cool
bsweber
   bsweber on Jan 13 '09
Maltzmania on Jan 12 '09

NOT PENNY'S BOAT







lolbrilliant
Elissa_S
Elissa_S on Jan 13 '09
If you read it left to right, it looks like it says 'Never bite that the feeds you hand'.

Good concept though, and now you've got 'The Hand That Feeds' by Nine Inch Nails in my head :/
dversdzn
dversdzn on Jan 13 '09
Thanks everybody, I wasn't exactly going for readability with this particular design. The focus was more on making the words into the design and letting the viewer "find" the saying.



Unfortunately I found out about the type contest too late to be able to submit the design for critique first.
rootsdeepinthesky
rootsdeepinthesky on Jan 14 '09
Great design. I don't like the placement though.
InvincibleAgent
InvincibleAgent on Jan 16 '09
Can't read it.
taralaine
taralaine on Jan 17 '09
huh?
morgantown
morgantown on Jan 18 '09
I would like this better if the hand were at an angle somehow, across the heart or something, so it's not so rigid.
dversdzn
dversdzn on Jan 18 '09
morgantown: I tried the across the heart placement but it felt a little too "pledge of allegiance" to me. Any time I try to get a little frisky with my wife she always puts her had square in my chest and pushes me away so I went with that. :D



InvincibleAgent: as far as not being able to read it, the goal of the contest was to have the type become the design, readability was not the ultimate focus for me.
abelitza85
abelitza85 on Jan 18 '09
cool idea



Check out mine!



Bondarina
Bondarina on Jan 18 '09
love the idea
BrenniFresh
BrenniFresh on Jan 19 '09
I was able to read it only because "ever" is clear enough to get me started. Otherwise, it might be too complicated. However, ambiguity is not always a bad thing. My only question is what is the thumb?
Lord Mullack
Lord Mullack on Jan 19 '09
It looks great but it's a little hard to read
dversdzn
dversdzn on Jan 19 '09
thumb is the letter "n". Never bite the hand that feeds you.
5 days later
Joppson
Joppson on Jan 25 '09
I thinkl it was brilliant, too bad the voting had ended when i found this, would have been a big 5 otherwise.
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