Beware
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Apr 20 '04
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1.48 from 594 votes
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what does the line on the right say?
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it says " a job only an honest politician can do
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This tee leaves everybody in a hard spot since there are no honesty in politics, and its way to messy desing wise to be warn. But i like the idea. Mayby put the smail text on the back, and just leave the triangle on the chest.
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Kinda stating the obvious, yes? But I like the graphic. I'm a sucker for "alert" symbols.
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a little too political for me.,
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something in the typo leaves me hanging...
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you might want to tone down the stroke weight around the text on the left and right sides of the triangle.
there's some really nice things happening on the sides of this design, but i'm getting turned off by the middle and the rather cryptic typographical content. |
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too busy to be an alert sign...and if you're going to have drips
on your letters, do it by hand...not with a font of www.dafont.com also: text is stretched or squished on the sides....and not so that one side matches the other...visually that just itches |
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I don't like the hands on the sides with the clouds... get rid of them maybe? Don't know how it would look. Also, I'm not really a fan of black t's... try some color buddy. I like the message tho.
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Agree w/ Camouflage..
#1 rule of design-- don't abuse a font. a typesetter in the early 1990s couldn't squish type, so neither should we. Other than that, i think it's a pretty good idea.. with a little cleaning and some more work it could be a nice shirt. |
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the color scheme is dull to me. The sign is cheesy. And it has little graphic appeal.
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Take out the alert sign, take out the "white" clouds, leave the fingers pointing and type in nipples in between.
Right now it's very busy, messy but in a too contrived sort of way. maybe to freshen it up, photocopy the design in black and white, roughen the copy on some concrete, rescan and print one colour on black. Might look more gritty and fresh. |
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