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thought it was only appropriate to use golden in a text design ~ I think it would look good on almost any darker color. All comments and critiques welcomed :)
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the font seems too forced :( and powerpoint-esque... HAND DRAW IT next time cuz this slogan is A+, and the "silver tounge" text could be epic
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Wow, waaay too many fonts. Tacky gradients, poor line-spacing, and boring centered text. The slogan is okay, but the type needs way more work. Also, I think there should be a comma after "golden".
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i feel like if you're going to distort the "across" text, it should be wider horizontally, not narrower.
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this design would be a lot better if you kept "golden" and "silver tongue" as is, and used one really basic sans-serif font in one color (like white) for the rest of the type.
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thanks for the honesty,this was just me trying something different but I realize different isn't always better!
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Reminds me of stuff you'd say printed across 'tweeny-bopper shirts from JCPenny or something. I'd love handwritten vs. blingy-fonts. This has potential, but spend a bit more time on it.
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