ben franklin forever

Cute start, but it really needs something else to jump the concept gap. Maybe even some big lightning bolts underneath that spell out in the bolts ben forever, or have a joke off the skull and crossbones, and have two lightning bolts, and for the skull have the kite and the key on it. Have it say Ben Forever or something more punny below it and voila!

yeah..the father of electricity!good work!

I like the choice of the brown shirt. I also agree it needs something a little more. But maybe instead of more drawing, one more color. I think this could salvage it from looking too much like a book report cover.

No, no. This is awesome as it is. Concessions don't need to be made to make sure anyone who sees this instantly gets it instead of spending 2.5 seconds thinking about it.

"Ben forever"?? skull and crossbones?? Ah, no.

your quirky illustration is sweet