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yeah.. looks like the logo for this company, Celcom in Malaysia.
http://www.celcom.com.my But I still like the simplicity of it. And I agree with Broinyville.. slightly smaller would improve it. |
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the beak of the bird does not match the rest of the bird.
it is the only line that is perfectly straight. curve the beak, shrink the image (a lot), and move it to the pocket area. |
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there's such a strong diagonal in the image.. i know it's cliche, but i'd like to see it a little off center.. or maybe even a LOT off center.. just to draw more attention to that diagonal motion
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