I agree with designsan, but even without that, maybe a bit of characterization to the letters do they might be holding on or accidentally bump the Y or T off and the letter on the edge of the cliff reaching out, or even the T or Y holding onto the twig at the end of the cliff. also, the whole thing needs a better drawn execution, but nice idea for the contest man.
yes, i agree composition needs more work. I think you should extend the cliff as well, it doesn't take as much space when the bottom is cropped off like that. Nice idea though.
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